12/19/2018 c9 Archer Avalon
Aye, Basitin warriors are a force with which to be reckoned. And she’s a seamstress! Sounds like my kinda girl! Basitins are known for their loyalty, among other things. You’ve excellently portrayed the noble heart of a Basitin. Loving it!
Aye, Basitin warriors are a force with which to be reckoned. And she’s a seamstress! Sounds like my kinda girl! Basitins are known for their loyalty, among other things. You’ve excellently portrayed the noble heart of a Basitin. Loving it!
12/19/2018 c1 Archer Avalon
Finally, I found it! A good Twokinds fic! Whew! I’ve gone through several fics and have been successively disappointed. Good job! The writing is decent, although there is a slight inaccuracy in spelling, but that’s understandable. Non-professional authors are allowed some margin for error, but spelling aside, this is great!
Finally, I found it! A good Twokinds fic! Whew! I’ve gone through several fics and have been successively disappointed. Good job! The writing is decent, although there is a slight inaccuracy in spelling, but that’s understandable. Non-professional authors are allowed some margin for error, but spelling aside, this is great!
7/22/2017 c11 Guest
wen r u gonna update?
wen r u gonna update?
6/30/2017 c11 Guest
fanofiction134
AWWW, SO CUTE!
THE MINI SPEECH AT THE END WAS THE BEAT!
fanofiction134
AWWW, SO CUTE!
THE MINI SPEECH AT THE END WAS THE BEAT!
6/27/2017 c10 Guest
fanofiction134
aww, thats so cool! well done, very well done! I love it! keep doing what your doing!
fanofiction134
aww, thats so cool! well done, very well done! I love it! keep doing what your doing!
2/20/2017 c9 fanofiction134
Looks awesome so far, dude. Keep doing what your doing! Can't wait fo the next chapter(s).
Those other 2 reviews with my name posted the bottom are mine i just forgot my password XD.
Looks awesome so far, dude. Keep doing what your doing! Can't wait fo the next chapter(s).
Those other 2 reviews with my name posted the bottom are mine i just forgot my password XD.
2/6/2017 c3 Guest
fanofiction134
thanks for updating, i really appreciate it!
fanofiction134
thanks for updating, i really appreciate it!