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1/1 c11 MistressSleepwell666
Gaaahhh I’m sooo happy you finished this story! Although I know it’s hard to keep Naru in character, I think you have done a great job especially as he continues to grow as a person/ in expressing himself. Thank you!
12/29/2020 c11 3Claradare
Yay! This was awesome. I love these. The details behind Edward were so creepy! I can't wait for the third one!
12/29/2020 c11 Kallen21
I absolutely can’t wait for the next chapter
12/29/2020 c11 bbypeaches
I love this story and can't wait for the next story. Thankyou so much for this awasome story.
12/28/2020 c11 clairxd
I love this story. It's complex and entertaining. Having Naru and Mai be parents to Kara while they are still quite young and trying to figure out themselves and their relationship with each other sets your story apart. I personally can't wait for part 3.
12/28/2020 c11 ErikaSakura12
Omg this was a great story! Great job! I look forward to part 3 if you do decide to continue it!
12/28/2020 c11 kat-chan0603
Hi!
I really like your story and can't wait when you (hopefully) upload/write the third part. Just so you know that someone would actually read it.

I for one would liek to read in the next part how the relationship between Naru and Mai change.
Maybe in a mansion where a ghost is hunting parents like Naru and Mai for something? However not the child is hunting the place but the parents? Is this even interesting? I don't know...

Anyway, thank you so much for finishing this one.
Happy Holidays to you, too!
12/28/2020 c11 8shaid
A trilogy? Yay!

Thank you for sharing this wonderful story. I loved it. Good luck with the next story! Looks like I'm going to need to follow you...
12/27/2020 c10 Kallen21
I absolutely can’t wait for the next chapter
12/27/2020 c10 3Claradare
WHOA! I knew RIGHT from the beginning that the Edward doll would be a big deal, if not the final boss. I was actually deliberating between the abstract painting and the Edward Doll being the final boss; really, I should've predicted they'd both be involved!

I'll make the rest of my thoughts as short as possible:

Idt you need to make this or the first story romance. Though both definitely contain romance elements (which I, personally, would love to see MORE of in the future!) I don't think they necessarily classify as romance FICS, if that makes any sense.

Like Fuyumi Ono, you seem to lean away from that genre, in your writing. I have no doubt this stems partly from your general interest with Japanese RPGs and stuff. But it's been good for your stories, too, imo; Naru and Mai's decision to adopt Kara is made more grounded, logical, and real by the staunchly not-romance nature of your works. The lack of intense focus on the relationships in your FICS ironically serves to make them more profound. That said, I really, really hope you write another one of these, and that it can&does include romance in the genre!

I also just wanted to say that I LOVE Kara's character. It's true that she's a child, but as of now she's part-Naru, part-Mai, yet totally an individual. Despite the fact that she's not an OC, she easily won my heart.

The similarities between her and Naru are especially captivating, and that makes Naru's POV something I long for in this fic, especially. Possibly the most fascinating aspect of your story and it's sequel(s? Please!) is their relationship.

You're a lot more in-character with Naru than a lot of other fanfic authors are. He's tough to get, but you've got a pretty solid grasp, though I'd argue some details. And the hauntings you come up with are inspired and interesting.

I literally can't WAIT for the next chapter! Thank you for posting so soon!
12/21/2020 c9 8shaid
Intense! Yikes! I love the story you have going here. Really well written and lots of fun. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

Thanks so much for sharing this story and good luck with the next chapter!
12/20/2020 c9 3Claradare
I'm so happy to see that you updated! These are some of the best fics in this fandom, imo. I can't wait for the next chapter and I hope it comes out sooner rather than later, though I know life gets in the way with stuff like this.
12/20/2020 c3 Claradare
I've commented before, but rereading and just wanted to say that I personally like when the chapters are longer, so don't worry! I like to read details about the relationships in GH, particularly.
12/18/2020 c9 kat-chan0603
Hey,
I really like your stories and your writing style.
I was a silent reader for long but now I jsut had to say this to you.
You are amazing!
I can't wait for the next chapter. I would like to have the next one Naru-centric.
But either way it will be a great chapter!
12/17/2020 c9 Kallen21
I absolutely can’t wait for the next chapter
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