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11/24 c30 9LovelyLadyAllie
From beginning to end this story is captivating, beautiful, and all the feels. I blame you for the unabashed love for Lumiere I now must shoulder. And there's a little bit of Babs in us all! Such an accomplishment, to labor away at something for so long, and I could not be more excited for you and how amazing this turned out! I just wanna hug them!
11/16 c30 25civilwarrose
This was such a beautiful ending! Thank you for the joy and passion and great characters of this epic story. This is more than just a 'fanfic.' It's a sweet historical romance escape from the reality of today. I'm going to read it over now that it's finally concluded! :)
11/15 c30 iantheharrup
YOU DID IT! HUZZAH!
This is such a good ending to this story. Everything goes well for everybody, and who could ask for more? We've been waiting two books for this ending, and how many years? I can't even imagine what was running through your head as you typed towards the final sentence, and finished with "To be continued..." It's a feeling I've had many times with screenplays, but I have never spent 5 years on any one project. You deserve to be proud of yourself!
I can't wait to see some your other projects! You have the patience to give your characters life, a commendable trait and a mark of a good writer. I count myself privileged to have jumped in on this journey last year, glad I could give you such encouragement! On to the next one!
5/4 c27 civilwarrose
Nicolas, you are just too good a man to be true. (Of course author, he's fictional but EEeeeeeee! How can he be so forgiving and gracious and loving and perfect?)
I think they would be lovely together as husband and wife, but then at the very end you showed how Babette is so anguished over this decision. She is going to have to let Lumiere go as a lover not as a brother or friend, and that's never an easy decision unless you have another plot twist up your sleeve. Such an emotional chapter- so glad to have another installment to read! :)
5/3 c27 thelunarwolfer
And the climax continues :):):):)
1/2 c26 thelunarwolfer
CLIMAX KICKED IN!
12/9/2019 c26 9So-crates Johnson
Damn, she just ripped that Band-Aid off! And, I mean, it was the right thing to do, despite what Lumiere asked. But my heart just about broke (for Nicolas AND for her) at the end of the chapter. I'm just hoping that this is a case of things getting worse before they can get better, because I feel so bad for all of them right now.
12/7/2019 c26 25civilwarrose
This is a wonderfully written scene! I feel so sorry for Nicolas though, it seems like the lifelong friendship with Lumière is ruined. But finally, the truth that has been tearing Babette apart is out.
12/3/2019 c26 iantheharrup
THE BOMB HAS DROPPED.

What a chapter! I think I love the most how uncertain the ending is - Nicholas's reaction will be a surprise, and likely not a very amiable one! Well done on this chapter!
11/13/2019 c25 9So-crates Johnson
Ok, now I'm starting to think you're just being mean. :P

As much as I love Babette and Lumiere and am still hoping that this story will end with them together (it has to...right?), it's getting reeeaaally hard not to ship Babette and Nicolas.
11/11/2019 c25 batbinmyheart91
Ughgghghg so many feels and emotions going this way and that! My head is spinning with these last two chapters! I look forward to reading more. And I enjoyed this little flashback chapter!
10/22/2019 c24 So-crates Johnson
I loved the scene where Nicolas and Lumiere went to check in on Babette! The three of them together are really adorable and just a delight to read when they're getting along. It gives me hope that things between all of them can eventually smooth over once the air is fully cleared.

I enjoyed the story about Lumiere and Nicolas visiting Versailles and hope we'll eventually get to hear Babette's story!
9/26/2019 c23 batbinmyheart91
Poor Babette I would go stir crazy if I was put on bed rest let alone with such heavy and conflicting thoughts. And Lumiere as well he is so torn and poor Nicholas is just stuck in the middle and doesn't even know it! Great last two chapters so real excitement thrown into the mix! I can't wait to see how this is going to play out from here. I thought it was touching though Babettes mother taking the step and thanking Lumiere for being there for Babette when she had been at the castle. Agin very excited for the next chapter!
9/16/2019 c23 So-crates Johnson
Poor Babette! She already seems bored out of her mind with the bed rest, and she still has so much more to go. I did enjoy her assessment of Nicolas's reading material though. She definitely has gotten a pretty good dose of romance and melodrama in the past few days.

She and Lumiere are long overdue for a talk, but I wonder how openly they'll really be able to talk with Nicolas in the room. It seems like one way or another, the truth is finally close to coming out.
9/2/2019 c23 5singertobe
Come on, Lumiere! Just TELL HIM ALREADY!
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