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6/16 c51 Sirrah K
FanFiction is in need of an applause feature. I mean, from your continuous effort in writing this story and dealing with life outside of the story but going to it when you can, you deserve it! Reading this and anticipating every update has been such a thrill! I really like that my reviews helped you keep your spirits up; that’s been another great moment for me! I’m very happy for Jasmine, Jim, and company (the former two, most of all! <3), especially for the talk of destroying those abominable labs. As usual, I’m looking forward to the next story (since I remember theorizing about Jazzy’s parents, I was stunned to read the last lines!), and I can definitely wait as you have a break and focus on writing other stories. I wouldn’t be surprised if they rattled the stars! Congratulations on graduating college! Happy writing, and never stop pressing on!
2/8 c50 Sirrah K
I’m so going to enjoy reading Jim’s reaction! This is a long stretch, but could L.E.T.A have had something to do with that shield around Jasmine on that ship? I mean, blue light is always associated with her, unless it’s another mysterious trait regarding Jasmine’s abilities or something else (theorizing again). Also, I saw the name Pierce in place of Price when she took note of the injury after waking up. Just thought I’d point that out. So glad everyone got out all right! Not unscathed, but no flack from me
1/1 c49 Sirrah K
True love and heroism at their finest! Thanks for the dedication and for closing out the year with yet another climactic chapter! I hope things are going all right for you! I, too, am glad 2020 has come to an end. As for this year, all I can say is this: May God have a hand in this new year. Still retaining optimism and won’t stop praying for the best. Anything can happen...in real life AND in fiction, speaking of which...there’s gotta be a chance! If not for both, then at least for one! At least that’s what the last line of the chapter implied for me... Either way, I’m definitely staying tuned!
8/14/2020 c48 Sirrah K
To quote Jim’s theme song, “I’m still here.” XD And I understand completely. I think this year (that I HATE so much) holds the record number of times I’ve shed tears in grief and anger over being stuck at home for two and a half months, things on the news, and a loss. Makes that year I was in my last (and wrong) place of employment seem like such an easy time. How awful is that? It’s really great that you’re writing again! Things are hard, but pressing on and never giving up can really give a victorious feeling! After all, this chaos won’t last forever. As for the chapter—wow, my soft side feels horrible for Price, but my moral side knows that what happened years ago never justifies such actions like his. I’ve got a pretty good idea what may happen next, and this could be one of those moments when I hope I’m wrong. Still looking forward to reading more because . . . I’M STILL HERE
4/18/2020 c47 Sirrah K
Of course the Braivroks won’t make stopping their quest for destruction so easy. Glad and thankful for the update; I hope you yourself are faring well during this crisis! It’s not easy on my end (emotionally, at least), but hope for the best is not something worth losing. Stay safe and healthy, and I look forward to the next chapter!
12/30/2019 c46 Sirrah K
Sic ‘em, Jasmine! There are stars to rattle, especially skeletal frames! LOL I hope you had a merry Christmas!
11/25/2019 c45 Sirrah K
I think I have a pretty good idea what’s gonna happen since the climax of the last story was subtly referenced. I’m not even sure whether to root for Jasmine to carry on her plan or hope she won’t go for what she’s planning since this situation seems more personal. Talk about a crossroad! And a happy Thanksgiving to you as well! Obviously I’m thankful for you and your talent for storytelling based on a Disney movie! Looking forward to what happens next, as usual!
10/30/2019 c44 Sirrah K
That’s heavy stuff all right! When you’re in a war and risking your life to save people and stop your enemies, stuff’s not going to be light and eyes will not be dry. As for a mob, relax! Not like you’ve got Annie Wilkes coming after you. I would prefer the pitchforks at that point...
10/21/2019 c43 Sirrah K
Yup, Jasmine really needed that! Can't wait to see how they'll pull off against the Braivroks (and personally, against the one who gives kindness a bad name)! And yeah, LOL, the opportunity was there. Always grab it with both hands! Luckily my tech's not messing with me tonight. And as always, no worries and just keep doing your best!
9/30/2019 c42 Sirrah K
TikTok, huh? This has Kesha written all over it to me LOL (looked up the app so I know what you mean) Being serious now: That was very noble and loving what the king did for Adeline there. She’s really gonna need love and support more than ever now. Lastly, I just have a few things to say here: Don’t stop! Make it pop, LH.96, psych the readers up! Gotta fight, also write, till ya see the sunlight! TikTok on the clock! But us readers won’t stop no! Oh-whoa-oh-oh! Oh-whoa-oh-oh! (Hehehe I had to!)
9/30/2019 c42 Sirrah K
TikTok, huh? Is Kesha involved too? LOL! Being serious now, a noble, loving move on the king’s part. Adeline’s really going to need Talion and Jasmine more than ever now. Don’t stop! Keep up the fight (and the write) till you and Jasmine and the gang see the sunlight! You can do it!
9/7/2019 c41 Sirrah K
! Going totally Jeannie Bueller again! Aaarrrggh! I forgot about a whole fleet! If this isn’t the Endgame, I don’t know what it is! Hopefully my heart doesn’t break. I feel it’s now appropriate to say this: Intergalactic Army, ASSEMBLE! (Anything against the Braivroks)
8/29/2019 c40 Sirrah K
Cats. In my experience, they’re a joy (if they’re not relentlessing mewing so loud). And, well...this is quite shell-shocking. To start off on how to theorize what’s about to happen, and WHO is behind the murders, as I suspect is the case because the king of Ascion is said to be in danger at the memorial service, this is what I have to say:

1. It seems Lyra Oberon MAY NOT be the murderer after all because why would Jasmine gape at a familiar face of her mother on a group photo of the experimented when she already knows Lyra is one of those with the infused DNA? She would have already suspected while listening to the recordings.
2. I think it’s time to put Oron Price at the top of the list. He could be coming up in the next chapter(s) because looking back, I can’t ignore suspicious evidence against him. Not to mention what I reread near the end of Chapter 25 that seems to be a clincher now! Here’s why (again, as I’ve already mentioned some of these):
a. His kindness to his students is forced according to Jasmine, so she’s not buying the act
b. Jasmine has seen him before but doesn’t know where, which is troubling
c. He won’t tell Jasmine or any of the students what’s not being said about the Battle of Death’s Fall, but it’s clear he knows something
d. “...a twitch in his left hand,...the murderer is LEFT-HANDED!

Piecing this together, Oron Price has to be one of the experimented soldiers! That’s why she gaped at the group photo! His kindness toward his students is an act because if he was injected with Braivrok DNA, he’s holding back a Braivrok’s aggressive nature. Jasmine should know! Jasmine probably knows him somehow due to a psychic link which I can’t explain unless he had something to do with coming to Jasmine’s home and killing her aunt and uncle (but that would have been a brief encounter, so this part of my theory is undeveloped). If he’s holding back info about the Battle of Death’s Fall, it’s probably because it was the experimentations that aided the Intergalactic Army against the Braivroks. Like Lyra, Price must have hated what he went through, which may have led him to seek vengeance against the Illuminas Council for subjecting him to that horror. Not to mention the new law in the Accords makes him a target of death to extinguish the threat of a Braivrok. If that revelation were to get out, the council would probably have the galaxy turning against them. Also, in the visions Jasmine had, the murderer is left-handed and Price was twitching his left hand like it was guilty of something when Jasmine questioned him about the incomplete info on the BoDF. Of course, if he had Braivrok DNA infused, he’s capable of wielding their weapons. It’s GOTTA BE HIM! Otherwise I’m still missing something. Man, if Jasmine doesn’t get her messages out in time, there may be a memorial service right after THIS memorial service
8/28/2019 c40 7sailorsenshi13
I’m wondering if Professor Price is involved somehow. If he was the face she recognized.
8/24/2019 c39 sailorsenshi13
Looking forward to find out what happens at the lab.
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