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12/8/2020 c14 131jojoDO
First off, let me reiterate...it's so cool that you've gone in a different direction with the outcome of the fated battle between Heihachi and Kazuya. I for one found it very unusual and baffling how Kazumi Mishima was the final boss of Tekken 7, yet in the actual story mode... she was killed in a flashback. Just kinda strange. So the fact that you've changed things up is awesome!

Now then... if I'm not mistaken, this is the first time we actually get to witness what happened! I know you've addressed it in other email fics, but this is the first one we actually SEE Heihachi get his head blasted off by Kazumi lol. And I still can't believe it!

I gotta admit, it tugged at my heartstrings a bit, seeing Lars so conflicted about seeing the man who gave him life die in such a way. Just goes to show that Lars has very real, human emotions. I believe anyone in that position would feel the same way.

So could we see a merger between Hwoarang and Lars's forces, and Julia's guerilla force? THIS IS SO AWESOME I CAN'T WAIT!
12/7/2020 c14 9alwaysdoubted
EVeryone within Lars' camp is waiting in anticipation of the coming battle between Heihachi and Kazuya, the world's fate dependent on this confrontation. Much to everyone's surprise, Kazumi came in and blasted her own husband before incapacitating Kazuya. Like everyone else's thoughts, Lars is sure Kazumi might be a bigger threat than the other two combined. What she wants or demands, no one knows.

Hwoarang cannot believe what just happened despite the fact he still wants his rematch with Jin. Honestly, he needs to let that go. What is there to prove? Plus, Hwoarang may just piss of Xiao as well, knowing how close the girl is to Jin.

alwaysdoubted
8/31/2020 c13 131jojoDO
Ho hooooo! What an awesome debut for Fahkumram into your universe (boy that's gonna be hard to type repeatedly, eh? I hope you added it to the dictionary!)

He was on his way to schooling Steve and Hwo in a handicap match, which is super impressive if you ask me. I just hope he's not biting off more than he can chew, assaulting the Zaibatsu HQ singlehanded... even for him, that's a tough one. Only a JACK can stand up to automatic weapons after all. Sucks for Hwo, but he didn't get the Early Bird Special lol. Fahkumram went in first and stole all the glory! Haha!

But yeah, aside from that, there was a lot more exposition in this one. Azazel, Nina defecting... I'm seeing signs of not only Nina's story, but the Manji story as well, interconnected with this one. It's awesome that you can juggle all that!
8/24/2020 c13 9alwaysdoubted
Hwoarang continues to follow Lars and his rebel forces but Jin's trail went cold as the two made it to where the battle took place. They now know that Xiaoyu was involved as well, raising the stakes even higher. Running into Steve was the least of Hwoarang's problems as the big man known as Fahkumram nearly caved in both their heads. I wonder what beef he has with Heihachi and the Zaibatsu? Looks like most, if not everyone does nowadays. With his interference, Hwoarang is now left wondering what he should do.

alwaysdoubted
5/25/2020 c12 131jojoDO
WWWOW. Talk about happy mask, sad mask xD

First off, I just wanted to compliment your fantastic fight scene. You are really getting amazing at these! I see more and more vivid details come out, in every fight that you do, and that makes them incredibly enjoyable to read.

Now then... POOR HWO. Holy crap. He came so far, because he needed that Iron Fist money to have a good life. And now, when he had a chance to feel good about himself for besting Sergei... the tourney IS CANCELLED. Nooo! Just thinking about all that time and money he wasted in this tournament, having to get transportation, having to stay at people's places... and now it's all for naught? Hwo probably feels like driving his motorcycle into the nearest semi truck carrying tree logs.

Poor guy. Where will he got from here?
5/18/2020 c12 9alwaysdoubted
I can feel Hwoarang's disappointment that the tournament is canceled due to Heihachi and Kazuya preparing for one final strike against one another. Now that win against Dragonuv proves to be useless. That may be one of the lowest points Hwoarang has hit in a long time. Perhaps the cancellation will give him more time to search for Jin and Xiaoyu.

alwaysdoubted
2/18/2020 c11 131jojoDO
That was one of your best fight scenes ever, dunkingman! I was really impressed! The attention to detail, like what attack was being thrown where, and mixing in their signature moves, it all flowed perfectly. This was really some of your best work.

And I totally had Lars winning that one. Sorry Hwo, but you're no match for Mr. Plot Armor haha. As long as lightning courses through those fists, you got a very good chance of beating everyone. It was pretty sweet of Lars to give him private medical attention tho, and also offer the guy a job. Money is the one thing Hwo needs most! He's an upstanding guy.

Kudos for an awesome chapter.
2/17/2020 c11 9alwaysdoubted
A very interesting turn of events.

I think Hwoarang should make a better effort to see his mother more on a consistent basis. Like I said before, she did what she felt was the best for her child, though that could be debated since Hwoarang got entangled with the wrong people beforehand. Maybe there's a chance for mother and son to reconcile.

After Lars practically beat Hwoarang's brains in, he offers him a chance to join his rebel army and find Jin, with pay I might add. Quite generous of him to do. I can tell Hwoarang is taken aback by this since most of the Mishimas wouldn't give two cents about him in the slightest. I can tell this will be quite an interesting partnership though Jin already agreed to surrender to the United Nations. I can't wait to see what else is in store.

alwaysdoutbed
11/1/2019 c10 131jojoDO
Wow, I gotta admit, I have NEVER seen this tackled before in this fandom. In so many fictions, the parents usually don't exist unless they're vital to the plot. They're usually seen as some obstacle. But here, you actually gave Hwo the Loner a family! That was so sweet, to see her have such a tearful reunion with him. It made me feel for her deeply, despite just meeting this character for the first time in my life. Awesome!

Also, if the bio Android is Gigas, I honestly think Hwo can do better against that than Mr. Perfect Lars lol. If it's JACK, well... yeah. Same diff. xD

Very heartfelt chapter!
10/28/2019 c10 9alwaysdoubted
I feel so much for Saemi for finally reconnecting with her long lost child. I'm sure there was a lot of emotion from her side of things. I can't, however, tell what Hwoarang was feeling. Yes, it was his mother, but she abandoned him for specific reasons. I wonder what he really thinks of her after all these years apart. Maybe time will heal wounds or make them even bigger. Only time will tell.

alwaysdoubted
7/29/2019 c9 3Soulless Anti-Hero
Aw, I was rooting for Hwoarang!

Great update
Keep up the good work
7/29/2019 c9 131jojoDO
Oh man that was brutal. Hwoarang was flying high from his last victory, and then you go and put him up against Mr Plot Armor, a man he doesn't stand a friggin chance against. And now he's right back down to Earth. I bet now he regrets spending all that prize money, because now he needs to get back in the W column!

What an unfortunate turn of events for the ambitions and reckless Hwo.
7/29/2019 c9 9alwaysdoubted
I'm all for partying after a huge win against a Tekken mainstay but Hwoarang should know better than to drink himself into a stupor like that. And lo and behold, Kazuya was his next opponent. Hwoarang was very fortunate that his master was there to save his head. Otherwise, Kazuya was sure to put him in an early grave
6/7/2019 c1 3Soulless Anti-Hero
Hwoarang is one of my favorite characters and Yoshimitsu...
This is quite good, explaining what life is like for Hwoarang.

Keep up the good work
4/5/2019 c8 131jojoDO
I can't even imagine Hwoarang's excitement right now. This opportunity could CHANGE HIS LIFE if it actually kicks off. This isn't the same as hoping your football teams wins: he is praying for Xiaoyu to succeed because he could be set for life getting a cut of that share! I'm excited for Hwoarang too. I hope the guy finds fortune and lives in prosperity, and hopefully gives his master some bread too.

Onto that fight with Paul. Awesome stuff there! I had a feeling Hwoarang's youth would prevail; Paul may be tough, but he can't move like he used to. He's also probably half brain-dead from decades of getting punched lol. Poor guy. This reminds me I need to get back to my Paul story someday.

Good work here, dunkingman.
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