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4/24 c5 TGIFreyjasDay
This is so GOOOOD! I really hope you finish this, because poor Sayo deserves a happy ending!
5/26/2020 c5 Shkanontrice
THIS STORY SUX!
FO' SHIZZLE MA JAPIZZLE!
JOOJI IS THE ONLY TRU HERO!1
5/19/2020 c1 1LostDeskpop
This is one of my favorites!
5/15/2020 c5 4AutisticAnglophile
I just finished reading Umineko today. It's easily one of the best mangas, and in fact one of the best works of literature, I have ever read.

That being said, I just had to check out the fanfictions to see if there was anything good.

Listen, this fanfiction is an absolute gem.

The attention to character detail, the development, the telling of events from multiple perspectives, this is practically indistinguishable from the manga itself when it comes to quality. Like I could actually see this being a sidestory in a theoretical episode 9 of the manga, it is that good.

Keep writing this, it is amazingly good and I am eagerly awaiting the next update!
5/6/2020 c5 Link0011
With how stubborn Battler is it's kinda strange that he walked away from the situation with his Grandfather, but I suppose he's younger and probably a little more nervous.

So Shannon is gonna tell him? Damn that's going to be a good read.

Really enjoying this story! Hope to see more soon!
5/14/2018 c5 6Dschehuti
Too bad to hear that this story is on hiatus for the moment. Up until now it was a pretty nice read!
Everyone is neatly in-character and even Kinzo's anger at Battler seems reasonable to me (and you are raising a pretty good point about how Battler removing his name from the family register could be interpreted as shunning the entire Ushiromiya family, not only Rudolf).

I'm especially curious how Beatrice's altered letter in the prologue would have been introduced into the story. Shannon hasn't found the gold yet, so Beatrice has no reason to become a full-fledged character as of yet, but it very well could be interesting to still cause a hunt for the gold in this altered time-line. It might... make things even more interesting as just Shannon struggling with her conflicting feelings.

Sincerely,
Toth
1/26/2018 c6 James Birdsong
Good five chapters
6/20/2017 c5 Umber
Fuck clip hanger, this was so good, I need a good ending!
5/29/2017 c5 Guest
Don't worry. It's easy to fix a little slip up.
4/10/2017 c5 Scriptura
I love this Fic! Please update! it would be a shame if you didn't continue with it.
1/25/2017 c5 TheD0ct0r
Finally, a story that actually deals with the true nature of Beatrice. The writing is a little rough at points, but everyone feels pretty much in character, which is very important for a fanfiction based on this series. I'm interested in how moving Battler's return to 1984 will change things, since it was before that fateful day when Kinzo died and everything started going to hell in a handbasket. I'd love to see where you go with that (not to mention, where you go with the next chapter, thanks to this little cliffhanger).

Keep up the good work.
1/23/2017 c5 Accel the Worst
It really hurts to see how Shannon is suffering because of Battler's forgetfulness.
This final sequence was great ,but this cliffhanger is bad too cruel, now i'll have to wait until the next chapter to know what happens.
Great chapter overall.
1/17/2017 c4 Accel the Worst
Incredible how hard is to find a good Umineko fic lately, I'm loving this one, I'll be waiting for the next one.
1/14/2017 c4 1GreatLadyJillian
This seems like a really interesting story. I'm liking it so far. Interactions between Shannon and Ange always make me smile a little, and I really loved the atmosphere you created between George, Shannon, and Battler. I hope to see more of this in the future.

Oh, and also, there was one point in either this chapter or the last where "my" was spelled "m y" with a space, and another where I think Shannon was referring to looking into Ange's face for the first time since talking to her, but you missed the word "time" there. The second one might just be my not reading the sentence correctly though. Still, since this story's heading in a good direction, I thought I'd point those out before it gets very popular.

Keep up the good work.

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