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for The Four Days of Dedede's Christmas

1/8/2017 c3 Me
I hope you continue this. It fills me with cheer.
Keep Writing ~
12/25/2016 c3 SoulessAlpha
Oh. My. Nova... I might need a defribrillator because my heart stopped from all the utter cuteness this chapter had. It was nice to see more of Dedede's thoughts on his old family and his new mashed-up kinda family. Two brothers and a best friend indeed.

I like how close Dedede and Meta Knight seem in this story(letting Triple D pet him is a new one for sure, but it's highly encouraged U). It gives more of a perspective on them as a whole, and also manages to give Dedede more character. Coughcough*character that is well deserved*coughcoughcough.

Honestly, Dedede seems more of a character to me, that will do what he thinks is right and think from his gut instead of his head most of the time. Meta and Bandana might think things through, but he and Kirby are more to thibk with their hearts. Even if Dedede is more selfish and takes on a antoganist role, he certainly reminds me of Kirby. I mean, Kirby is willing to help anyone who needs it (Magolor I'm looking at you) even if he doesn't know them. Dedede might not willingly help you right away, however, he seems like the type to do just that! At least to me anyways.

To sum it all up, this was a great chapter, I like your way of portraying the quartet, and that I really need to stop rambling on about Dedede. Not my favorite character (coughcoughMeta Knightcoughcough) but not the worst either.
12/23/2016 c2 11Metanaito-kyou
It was so amusing to see what Bandana packed. I'm smiling like crazy over here.
And aww, now I'm feeling sorry for King Dedede ;_; But friends can be family too. :)
12/22/2016 c2 Meow
"I'm dreaming tonight...of a place I love, even more than I usually do. And although I know it's a long road back, I pro-mise you...I'll be home for Christmas, you can count on me".
Happy early Merry Christmas. Sorry for not responding to the "Family Reunion" story update. Thanks for the headsup on DeviantArt facts. Also, could not find the Kajinara picture on your DA account (but maybe I just am not use to the site or maybe log-in only access?) You wrote chapter 2 in a day...! Sheez, I can't get my ideas as organized in draft as quickly as that in such a profession manner.
Skipping the point, I think I'll try contacting you this upcoming year.
So to the point: Yes Triple D to the 4th exclamation point yes! A DDD tale. Almost like a call to my reviews. Thank you! (or maybe I misunderstand beyond the need to increase the DDD awareness). To comment, I think there is a new Kirby anime in production stages (Kirby Shining Star) which should redefine and align the negative or warped views cast by the original animation.
Thoughts: Still cannot figure out how to denote cell phone control on Popstar... Is Dedede wearing gloves while helping peel tape? Is Bandana Dee, in the past, the only Dee staying in the castle during the winter holidays (or current castle abode...actually which castle do you usually place the crew hanging at...? There are at least 5 locations throughout Dreamland territory for sure with DDD estate, if you disregard Royal Road). Be home for the holidays then is really a confusing answer to pinpoint. Also, (to Family Reunion) Meta Knight's reflect toward what it means to be himself as a "liger" (sans the infertily...) was timed realistically to inwardly ponder. Back to 4D Christmas, a debatable question: Does DDD have a white stomach? I lean towards no, but some adhere the Squeak Squad artwork rendering (which I think is a humongous bandade. Question arises because if Pengu{in} species is almost per quota descriptive-wise...just contemplating the cavalcade-rookery). Does DDD have four fingers and a thumb? I think so. Does MetaKnight spy on people with binoculars? Quite daily.
Then of course, the extent of technology on Popstar. Vacuum cleaners, phones, electricity, computers, welders, rockets, magnetic force fields, nuclear power plants...
The sweetness of that statement "...they'd give me some little brothers..." is such a conflicting emotional intake. Another strong image was if this was part of a looooonnnngggg series of stories, the thoughts and actions of DDD would be the warning flag to some impending disaster thrust upon him.
Consider Noodling as a method for the Great King, Bandana! Or, you know, the Great King could just overtake the marine life with penguin hyper-underwater speed and clamp ultilizing his jaw, incapcitating his prey.
Only thing out of place in the flow: Chapter 1, Kirby hyperspace yank naked gingermen and kind of forced refocus on the frosting. It sort of just felt like "here!". Definitely different as to the constant motion common.
Wondering: Is Dedede-Dedede-Dedede a reference joke to SilverWolf's stories? Or just a Bobobo-bo-bobobo wordplay?
Anyway, excited your doing okay and crafting wholesome tales.
12/22/2016 c2 30Azuranaito
That last little line was so sweet in the end! You do kinda portray Bandana Dee, Kirby, Meta, and Dedede like some big family in a way, which is nice for the whole Christmas motif. Good job :)
12/22/2016 c2 SoulessAlpha
I swear these chapter are going to melt me. They're just too darn adorable for my frosty heart! At least Bandana Dee gets to visit his family (which I'm glad you included) but you can't help to feel bad for the puffies. :'(

I'm just not going to talk about Dedede or I'll end up ranting again. That's a bad habit for me, I'm always ending up overthinking everything. Annnnd I ended up off track again. Also, it's my last day of school this year! I'll have time to read again!
12/21/2016 c1 Azuranaito
I forgot to review this when I read it but oh my gosh. Christmas fanfics are great, and I have two Kirby ones I'm gonna work on, but this was awesome! It was so funny, the part with Meta Knight with the cake frosting was priceless! I couldn't get that out of my head and imagined the knight with a bunch the whole time! So so funny! Can't wait for next chapter! And, Merry Christmas.
12/21/2016 c1 11Metanaito-kyou
Ahhhh, the second I saw this I knew it would be great :D I love all the dialogue; it's so witty and keeps to their characters splendidly! I'ts also my opinion that this is the perfect length n_n

All together, swell job on this fic! I love the holiday stories and this one is adorable! C:
12/21/2016 c1 laaaa
*sheds a tear*
12/21/2016 c1 291Thunderfire
I love these light-hearted kind of tales; they're nice to read when I just feel like chilling out. And the antics of our four friends are just amusing of course. :)

Best bit:

"But you never hit me," Kirby commented.
Dedede shoved his hand in the puff's mouth. :D
12/20/2016 c1 SoulessAlpha
This was brilliant, and hilarious. It's 12:00 AM and I'm trying not to wake up my family because I've been laughing at this. Dedede-Dedede-Dedede, what a mouthful! I mess up trying to say his normal name, so I'm not even going to try for this one.

On another note, you're right about the whole not protaying Dedede correctly as much as there should be. I'm not bashing on anyone, but Dedede gets pretty much the worst treatment here. He's misguided sometimes, but that doesn't mean he's delibrately trying to kill everyone. Meta Knight does what he thinks is best, and so does Dedede, except in his own way. It irks me to see that, but I'll still read them and try to get my triggered mind away from the subject. Dedede's an emotional character that lets his feelings take over and guide him to bad decisions. Even then, when he does know what's morally wrong, he tries to fix it. Nightmare in Dream Land for example ( my very first Kirby game I might add), it turned out that Dedede was trying to stop Kirby from awakening Nightmare. In the end, they team together and stop Nightmare! Even though they become enemies again, this shows that even Dedede has a moral consience (I'm looking at you anime).
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Enough ranting and raving for now. Sorry about that, I just get worked up about that subject sometimes. Back to the fic in hand, overall this was amusing and entertaining. 8/8 gr8 job m8! (Meta Knight trying to steal that frosting. Tsk tsk. It'll never happen soon. Only in our dreams dear Meta, only dreams.)
SoulessAlpha, who is too lazy to bother logging in at the moment.

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