12/25/2020 c13 1Elder scrolls
It is not fortunate that jess has a new girlfriend. And you have not updated in 5 years. Disappointing
It is not fortunate that jess has a new girlfriend. And you have not updated in 5 years. Disappointing
1/23/2020 c13 AquaLight708
I want to know what happens next. This story is so good, that I consider it canon. Kudos to you, and I hope you still do an update soon!
I want to know what happens next. This story is so good, that I consider it canon. Kudos to you, and I hope you still do an update soon!
5/28/2018 c13 Christina
What a cliffhanger. I know it has been a long time since you updated, but you can't leave us hanging like this. LOL I'm not sure Kaytee's the right person to become a ruler of the kingdom or even know about it. Leslie was very particular of who could know, and I think she'd want them to be someone Jess knew very well like May Belle is. Either way, though, truly wanna know what happens next.
What a cliffhanger. I know it has been a long time since you updated, but you can't leave us hanging like this. LOL I'm not sure Kaytee's the right person to become a ruler of the kingdom or even know about it. Leslie was very particular of who could know, and I think she'd want them to be someone Jess knew very well like May Belle is. Either way, though, truly wanna know what happens next.
11/2/2017 c10 Guest
So far i'm a little disappointed that you haven't mentioned about Jess talents: drawing. I think it is very crucial becauses drawing is how he has his imagination and how he befriend with Leslie. And i think after Leslie "painfully to watch and read event", Jess would drown himself in his own world of painting. Other than that, the story has a good flow and i would love to see how it gonna "playout" :) keep up the good work! Thank you!
So far i'm a little disappointed that you haven't mentioned about Jess talents: drawing. I think it is very crucial becauses drawing is how he has his imagination and how he befriend with Leslie. And i think after Leslie "painfully to watch and read event", Jess would drown himself in his own world of painting. Other than that, the story has a good flow and i would love to see how it gonna "playout" :) keep up the good work! Thank you!
11/2/2017 c2 Guest
I like the idea of new neighbor, not really unique but realistic :)
I like the idea of new neighbor, not really unique but realistic :)
11/2/2017 c1 Guest
Nice, hope this second part will somehow comfort me by how the original one ends. And so far so good. :)
Nice, hope this second part will somehow comfort me by how the original one ends. And so far so good. :)
5/1/2017 c1 A Student
I would just like to say that I'm expecting a lot from your fanficition already because the people who made my state assessment actually used this as a reference and have acknowledged your story. Can't wait to read!
I would just like to say that I'm expecting a lot from your fanficition already because the people who made my state assessment actually used this as a reference and have acknowledged your story. Can't wait to read!
3/3/2017 c13 Guest
Its real nice creativity all this creativity portrays a deeper philosophy which humans ignore but only children seee...
Its real nice creativity all this creativity portrays a deeper philosophy which humans ignore but only children seee...
1/19/2017 c13 Tushar
This is gr8 pls post more
Thank you for for posting this.
Really thank you.
This is gr8 pls post more
Thank you for for posting this.
Really thank you.
12/19/2016 c1 Guest
please don't quit on us
please don't quit on us
10/13/2016 c9 Ayya
Nice story
Nice story