3/2/2014 c3 Miss Megz
The chances of you updating are slim but I like this story not to hold out hope!
The chances of you updating are slim but I like this story not to hold out hope!
12/3/2013 c3 15The Red Dove
Hey, you think you could do me a favor and update soon? Thanks in advance! :)
Hey, you think you could do me a favor and update soon? Thanks in advance! :)
10/4/2013 c3 Guest
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS IS AMAZING PLEASEEEEE :O
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS IS AMAZING PLEASEEEEE :O
3/17/2013 c3 27Iglika
Another tense chapter, poor Zee! Please keep writing, please update soon! I want to know what will happen next, please keep writing!
Another tense chapter, poor Zee! Please keep writing, please update soon! I want to know what will happen next, please keep writing!
3/17/2013 c2 Iglika
I read it on one breath! Poor Zee! Although he is in his synthoid’s form here, he’s so human! And I like the way Bennet shows compassion toward Zee!
I read it on one breath! Poor Zee! Although he is in his synthoid’s form here, he’s so human! And I like the way Bennet shows compassion toward Zee!
3/17/2013 c1 Iglika
I’m so sorry I wasn’t able to read it earlier, but now I’m back here. This was a very interesting and surprising chapter!
I’m so sorry I wasn’t able to read it earlier, but now I’m back here. This was a very interesting and surprising chapter!
10/24/2012 c3 4Dragoncat
Does Agent West have an idea? Is that a good sign or bad?
Please continue! I really, really want to know what happens next! By all means...
KEEP ON WRITING!
Does Agent West have an idea? Is that a good sign or bad?
Please continue! I really, really want to know what happens next! By all means...
KEEP ON WRITING!
7/6/2012 c3 Guest
This is very good. If you had written this cartoon no one would have said it wasn't dark enough. Are you going to finish? I'd like to know what happens next.
This is very good. If you had written this cartoon no one would have said it wasn't dark enough. Are you going to finish? I'd like to know what happens next.
3/16/2012 c3 1Lady Vai
Great so far! Hope you continue -crosses fingers-
You captured Bennett's humanity really well, he's not a bad guy, he just wants to protect his country.
Krick on the other hand...he's a bad guy.
I hope Zee and Ro are alright!
Please update soon!
Great so far! Hope you continue -crosses fingers-
You captured Bennett's humanity really well, he's not a bad guy, he just wants to protect his country.
Krick on the other hand...he's a bad guy.
I hope Zee and Ro are alright!
Please update soon!
2/19/2012 c3 Aranel
Love it! Please, please continue! Don't leave me in suspense.
Love it! Please, please continue! Don't leave me in suspense.
1/3/2012 c3 250CampionSayn
Sa!
Ah, and this is where you'v wandered off to. Not working on your other Zeta fic? Naughty! Oh, well, at least your focus was well recieved with this. I'm quite proud you can come up with another one and write it so well, actually.
Sa!
Ah, and this is where you'v wandered off to. Not working on your other Zeta fic? Naughty! Oh, well, at least your focus was well recieved with this. I'm quite proud you can come up with another one and write it so well, actually.