1/20/2014 c2 9Mockingjay2001
I love your story! Both these of series are some of my favorites and you're the only person who's done a crossover. Please keep going!
I love your story! Both these of series are some of my favorites and you're the only person who's done a crossover. Please keep going!
8/28/2013 c2 Guest 22222222
So, first off, no one says I love you on the first date! He would have either gotten freaked out or run away. Also Dan couldn't get to the park from their mansion, unless he took a cab or something, in which case he would have to have been trusted with cash. Also, how did Amy get home? She just ran off to the other side of the park! Also, Ian wasn't being smart when he told Amy he had just apologized, that just seemed like Amy being stupid. A bit of rewriting and this wouldn't be awful.
So, first off, no one says I love you on the first date! He would have either gotten freaked out or run away. Also Dan couldn't get to the park from their mansion, unless he took a cab or something, in which case he would have to have been trusted with cash. Also, how did Amy get home? She just ran off to the other side of the park! Also, Ian wasn't being smart when he told Amy he had just apologized, that just seemed like Amy being stupid. A bit of rewriting and this wouldn't be awful.
2/11/2013 c2 TheChubbyBunny
Great story! Its so romantic and I really liked how you paired up Any and Josh! *fan girl squel*
Great story! Its so romantic and I really liked how you paired up Any and Josh! *fan girl squel*
5/20/2012 c2 7The Writer Who Kills
Wow the first signed review. Anyway please update! please please please please UPDATE! I love these story and I'm starting to think that Josh and Amy might have some alchemy together. ;))
Wow the first signed review. Anyway please update! please please please please UPDATE! I love these story and I'm starting to think that Josh and Amy might have some alchemy together. ;))
3/22/2012 c2 Chocolatefan
Good continue!
Good continue!