3/3/2013 c3 4BoqBeak
I haven't been out of this due to lack of interest. I was in the middle of a chapter, when there was a technical problem.
I haven't been out of this due to lack of interest. I was in the middle of a chapter, when there was a technical problem.
5/27/2012 c3 3OnFireGeek
Oooooh. Exciting to see you back up! Very nice chapter. I liked how you opened with H.J. saying that he was happy that he was writing as himself. It was a nice touch.
Oooooh. Exciting to see you back up! Very nice chapter. I liked how you opened with H.J. saying that he was happy that he was writing as himself. It was a nice touch.
12/30/2011 c2 OnFireGeek
Dun dun duuuuuun! The plot thickens! I like this. The pacing is a bit slow, but it's not bad by any stretch of the imagination.
Dun dun duuuuuun! The plot thickens! I like this. The pacing is a bit slow, but it's not bad by any stretch of the imagination.
12/7/2011 c1 OnFireGeek
Oooooh. Alex like. I personally think that if this is the 1st chapter, you shouldn't say 'Henry Jekyll, now at age 15,'. I think that you could botch the 'now at' part, if that makes any sense. And I figured out that Poole is a guy! (I thought that Poole was a girl.) Learn something new every day, I guess. Very nicely done.
Oooooh. Alex like. I personally think that if this is the 1st chapter, you shouldn't say 'Henry Jekyll, now at age 15,'. I think that you could botch the 'now at' part, if that makes any sense. And I figured out that Poole is a guy! (I thought that Poole was a girl.) Learn something new every day, I guess. Very nicely done.