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12/9/2020 c1 Orecal
Your writing is amazing ! I read non-stop ! I've read a lot of stories in my life, but this is the best story I've ever read! Please write another sequel !
9/18/2019 c23 22Anno1701
I just read your story and it's great! It caught me from the first chapter and I couldn't stop reading. Very well done, I loved it!
5/28/2019 c23 2JusticeNotRevenge
Oh my God. This is beautiful. I love it! I read the first chapterd a while ago but for some reason decided not to continue. Nearly a year after rthat I remembered the plot of the first chapters and went on a Google hunt. Found this fic and honestly thank God I did. This is beautiful. I'm on my way to check for a sequel but if there isn't one, know that I suggest you make one and will be completely supportive if you do.
10/16/2017 c23 7RainaWrites
Awww. Great last lines. Was that a hint about Babs becoming Batgirl some day? And Blake-haha his love/hate relationship with Batman was so entertaining. I'm glad that you included him so much in your story, I felt like the movie really shorted a great character there. I'm so sad it's over! I hope that at some point you get time to do the sequel, or at least write another story. You should definitely keep going-you have a talent! Thanks for giving me something to look forward to reading, and giving me a chance to live in Gotham City for awhile!
10/16/2017 c22 RainaWrites
Was it Bane who sent the letter? And who did the TV signal interruption? You have to write a sequel!
10/16/2017 c21 RainaWrites
"Minding his surroundings"-I love the reference to the first movie. I think you did Talia's character so well. Seriously, you do a great job capturing characters! Love the bittersweet ending, too. I kind of feel sorry for her. Her story with Bruce echoes her father's story with Bruce. Oh man I just realized this is almost over. Please please please write another story!
10/16/2017 c20 RainaWrites
Yes! Go Gordon! And Jimmy is safe...phew!
10/16/2017 c19 RainaWrites
Ahhh okay so I suspected there was a connection between Armande and Sylvia, but I didn't suspect they were the one in the same! This is not looking good for them. I'm just so worried about Jimmy! Hahaha okay next chapter next chapter...I must find out!
10/16/2017 c18 RainaWrites
I seriously love every scene with Jimmy. You've made him such a dinstinct/admirable/plucky character. I'm feeling so nervous for him right now, though!
10/16/2017 c17 RainaWrites
Oh my gosh the action has been heating up! I love the pacing of your story. I don't feel like it has drawn out or anything like that. I was so shocked at what happened to the Gordon home! And Jimmy! Now Batman is going to be PISSED hahaha.
10/16/2017 c16 RainaWrites
I think it was a really great idea to have this chapter in here! Bruce Wayne has always been broody; I think it's an essential part of his character. He's human and he struggles with his morale from time to time. But I love how Alfred always comes through with his tough love. I can really see this fitting in with the Christopher Nolan movies. Excellent job capturing their characters!
10/16/2017 c15 RainaWrites
That first paragraph is soooo good. Especially the "This ate away on the inside, clawing away at the last bit of bravery that each citizen owned" line. The whole paragraph sets up a feeling of unease; it's like the intro of an episode on TV where you know stuff is about to go down! I love it!

And then the scene right after that. I was begging Batman not just leave the Gordon residence, so I was relieved that Jimmy came out. Gahhh such a sweet scene! One of my favorite things about Batman is how he really does have a tender heart towards children, how he doesn't want anyone to despair the way he did. And you captured it so perfectly! I had to read that scene twice, I loved it so much.

Pretty entertaining dynamics for the car conversation! Blake is so close to the truth and doesn't even know it haha. And ahhh that ending! Man, this was such an awesome chapter. I think it's my favorite so far (although some of the earlier ones with Jimmy and Bruce have my heart, too).
9/24/2017 c14 RainaWrites
Ok I did NOT see that coming at the end! I really thought it was the mob coming to spring him. Love the twist! Also, Sylvia is French...which means she has a connection with Armande somehow, I just can't figure out yet if she's her own vigilante or if she's actually working for the bad guys...
9/24/2017 c13 RainaWrites
Hahaha the exchange between Blake and Bruce Wayne and then Blake and Batman. I love the contrast between how Gordon normally deals with the Dark Knight. They gave Blake such a small role in the movie, I'm happy to see him so fleshed out here. I can get a good grasp of his personality from your writing. And I'm also getting really worried for Gordon!
7/27/2017 c12 RainaWrites
Man, I got my hopes up that Gordon would be able to escape lol
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