9/18/2018 c45 Guest
Great story.
Great story.
10/13/2015 c45 6Hazmatt
Great story! I really enjoyed it! I'm glad everything worked out and that everyone was okay!
Great story! I really enjoyed it! I'm glad everything worked out and that everyone was okay!
11/28/2014 c18 satheo2013
Hi enjoying the story but, there aren't really any drive thru-s in any large city and they'd take a cab to the ER. I know cops drive in the city but if you're not driving for work you avoid driving like the plague when you are doing anything else. You cab/bus/subway/walk to your destination; e.g. the park. one HUGE reason is parking is a pain and not worth moving a car if you have a spot-you never move your car (if you even own one) until you absolutely have to. And then it's the cost of the parking even if it's meter-no one wants to pay it. a lot of the people I know of who do own a car sometimes have to run it because it's been sitting too long.
Just thought you'd want to know for authenticity sake.
Hi enjoying the story but, there aren't really any drive thru-s in any large city and they'd take a cab to the ER. I know cops drive in the city but if you're not driving for work you avoid driving like the plague when you are doing anything else. You cab/bus/subway/walk to your destination; e.g. the park. one HUGE reason is parking is a pain and not worth moving a car if you have a spot-you never move your car (if you even own one) until you absolutely have to. And then it's the cost of the parking even if it's meter-no one wants to pay it. a lot of the people I know of who do own a car sometimes have to run it because it's been sitting too long.
Just thought you'd want to know for authenticity sake.
2/18/2014 c4 27regina-milfs
Oh my. I love this! I was thinking of writing a 50 Shades of Grey for Rizzoli & Isles and I came upon this... I've already read the first 4 chapters in less than 10 minutes.
Amazing! I love it.
Oh my. I love this! I was thinking of writing a 50 Shades of Grey for Rizzoli & Isles and I came upon this... I've already read the first 4 chapters in less than 10 minutes.
Amazing! I love it.
11/6/2013 c45 GT500RonSmith
Why wouldn't he be sure? She told him she loved him!
Fun story! Thank you!
Why wouldn't he be sure? She told him she loved him!
Fun story! Thank you!
11/6/2013 c42 GT500RonSmith
He placed his hand on her thigh so casually, and she saw no reaction, so she covered it with her own hand! That was nice! She fits right in with his family!
He placed his hand on her thigh so casually, and she saw no reaction, so she covered it with her own hand! That was nice! She fits right in with his family!
11/6/2013 c41 GT500RonSmith
So nice that she went with him to pick up Alexis and Martha! I'm thinking she mostley just wanted to be with him to support him, but to him it probably meant a lot more. To his family it probably seems a lot more, too.
So nice that she went with him to pick up Alexis and Martha! I'm thinking she mostley just wanted to be with him to support him, but to him it probably meant a lot more. To his family it probably seems a lot more, too.
11/5/2013 c37 GT500RonSmith
That was unexpecpected! He had slipped earlier that he loved her, but she must have missed it, as it was not just those three words. But, for her to tell him, after saying she wasn't sure she even wanted to date him! This is huge!
That was unexpecpected! He had slipped earlier that he loved her, but she must have missed it, as it was not just those three words. But, for her to tell him, after saying she wasn't sure she even wanted to date him! This is huge!