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2/13/2019 c13 1I-Love-Trunks1
It’s so sad how Naruto and Sasuke's families were killed. Poor Naruto and Sasuke. I love how they both started to fall in love with each other. I love the plotline. It’s sad how they were seperated for 10 years. Poor Sasuke. I love male pregnancy stories! their son is so cute.

I was wondering if you could please write another fanfiction slash story of Naruto? with the pairing Naruto/Sasuke? I was thinking you could write the pairing Naruto/Sasuke from the other world where Naruto is Menma.
12/21/2018 c13 gindensmi
You did a great job writing this story!
8/6/2018 c2 fictionisaction
one thing i don't get is how tf did orochimaru ever beat minato? but daaaamn if this ain't good
8/23/2017 c11 2emowoods205
I just realized that Sasuke is a teen Mom he got pregnant at 15...And Naruto is 16..Damn they young...
8/22/2017 c1 emowoods205
I love the plot so far I just hope the story won't go by fast..
6/16/2017 c8 Tuesday's-Here
The line "The cool night air hit the tip like a baseball bat hits a baseball." had me skidding to a halt to make sure I read what I thought I read. I know it was suppose to roll with the sexual theme that was going on but it just made me laugh, I've read quite a few lemons and I have never encountered a line quite like that.

The overall story is pretty good and has an interesting story and plotline, a few spelling and grammatical errors but nothing glaringly obvious. I loved the idea that their bond was so strong that even though they were separated for 10 years they were still best friends! Evolving into something so much more is just sweet icing.

Thank you for writing and sharing this story with us!
4/5/2017 c14 Niha161
Fine, but its already so long after your lasr updating...
Come on, updated...
I know u want to
1/14/2016 c6 Person
Lol. Kyuubi totally stepped on him.
5/17/2015 c13 2DreamCatcher121
Lol "SHADOW COLON" ... I won't harp on you for spelling, but you might want to fix THAT particular one...

-DC
5/9/2015 c12 13notapieceofcake
Aahhh the drama! So happy that stupid snake is finally dead :D
5/8/2015 c11 notapieceofcake
I am /screaming/! Nasuto is /finally/ heeeere! Yaaay
But... the last line has me yworried
5/8/2015 c10 notapieceofcake
I like how you used the concept of using the enemy's powers against them.
Fuck the second big fight is gonna be between them and Orochimaru isn't it? Can't wait or that piece of crap snake to die!
5/8/2015 c9 notapieceofcake
Ohhh FUCK noooo! Killer B got hiiiim! Gdi!
5/8/2015 c8 notapieceofcake
Fuck. It's 3am I should really sleep lol
Anyway
God! This chapter was /hot/ though Naruto was extremely violent while killing the bastards
5/8/2015 c7 notapieceofcake
Aww Sasuke-bbyyy! This guy was an asshole .
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