9/2/2018 c6 Guest
The robbers start out as three men then become two. But of a discrepancy. Some of the flow is confusing. But still. It’s fun cheap and easy entertainment
The robbers start out as three men then become two. But of a discrepancy. Some of the flow is confusing. But still. It’s fun cheap and easy entertainment
9/1/2018 c4 Guest
Good writing. Thank you
Good writing. Thank you
8/19/2016 c8 Rogan Dean
Really enjoyed these, sad that you haven't done more but life is busy, wishing for 20 chapters. Really well written and so much fun!
Really enjoyed these, sad that you haven't done more but life is busy, wishing for 20 chapters. Really well written and so much fun!
8/2/2012 c6 Night Hawk 29
Please update. Don't give up on this story. I read it :) and I think its good. Anyway this is a great story.
Please update. Don't give up on this story. I read it :) and I think its good. Anyway this is a great story.
6/27/2012 c3 Guest
Oh, where do I start? Your grammar, for example, you used "quite" instead of "quiet". two completely different meanings. Is this set in the US? If it is, we don't use 999, it's 911. If not, never mind. You definintely need a beta.
Oh, where do I start? Your grammar, for example, you used "quite" instead of "quiet". two completely different meanings. Is this set in the US? If it is, we don't use 999, it's 911. If not, never mind. You definintely need a beta.
6/25/2012 c6 Joniron
I enjoyed your shorts very much, the one with the shamblers in the school is my favorite. I was kinda expecting a class full of zom kids.
I enjoyed your shorts very much, the one with the shamblers in the school is my favorite. I was kinda expecting a class full of zom kids.
2/15/2012 c4 14rhoades
Just finished reading the latest chapter and have to say I like where you are going with it.
Just a few mistakes with sentance structure but nothing major. Keep up with the story and hope to read an update soon. - Rhoades
Just finished reading the latest chapter and have to say I like where you are going with it.
Just a few mistakes with sentance structure but nothing major. Keep up with the story and hope to read an update soon. - Rhoades
12/1/2011 c2 World3nder
These are very good, I would say that these are the best creepypastas I have ever read.
These are very good, I would say that these are the best creepypastas I have ever read.
9/21/2011 c2 1Andrew.was.here
Nice job. Not much else to say, a few spelling errors but only like 1 or 2...but who cares. That was a great story!
Nice job. Not much else to say, a few spelling errors but only like 1 or 2...but who cares. That was a great story!
8/31/2011 c1 1Chromesdddm
This really is a good start to a good story.I'll have to make sure to read more of it.
This really is a good start to a good story.I'll have to make sure to read more of it.