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11h c30 19DimpleCurlAeternaGirl
I’m slow reading this story again to refresh my brain and am on Ch 5. WOW and WOW!. Your writing skills, dead accurate insights, the incredible depths and deep dives into characters, the storyline and layered plot-lines as it builds… It. Is. Sublime. Truly Lost-like.

It’s obvious you know, live, breath, eat and LOVE these characters and Lost. Yet, you unapologetically make bold choices, exposing their flaws in true Lost-form. Not just the good traits.

If I wasn’t already in love with your stories, I would be now. ;0) It’s a joy to read quality Lost stories, whether AU or canon, like yours. You bring back beloved characters in 3D - flesh and blood vs. anemic versions. And your immersive technique brings up feelings I have when I watch the show. There’s only one other FF Lost writer who’s made me cry with her story besides you.

In this chapter, my heart is broken for Kate. Her faith in Jack and subsequent alienation because of it. Jack promised to come back for her. With love. And we know how he is about his promises Especially when it comes to Kate.. Jack would crawl and claw his way through hell to save her alone. It makes me think of Locke’s note in canon. “I wish you believed me.” Oh, my heart...She does!

Kate deserves to be rewarded for her hope in Jack. Her faith is pushed beyond reason. This is an arc/charcter growth in Kate- Faith in general and in somebody she loves. She’s so very independent and has been let down by her parents and people around her growing up. It shapes a person. I love that she holds fast to Jack’s watch, originally gifted to Christian by Ray - the grandpa who loves Kate in canon. The watch means something to Jack. But doesn't' hold a candle to the bearer for him.

Ben and his nefarious plans…Whew! And Locke! I can’t wait to see what wicked web he weaves in your AU version. And how Locke (hopefully) mucks it up. Because Ben is Ben. And he always has a plan. But Locke is the one connected to the island. I love that he pointed out it healed him, yet it let Ben get cancer on his spine. lol. I’m glad Locke bucked Ben’s offer in this chapter. I hope he continues to not succumb to Ben's manipulation.

Erica, you are my inspiration, my guiding light and one of my favorite writers on this site! I absolutely love and adore you. I’m going to read the whole story again to refresh my brain. Same as Lost, there’s no skipping or cutting corners with this story. It’s all connected. I'm looking forward to an update from the Queen of Jate! 3
2/13 c30 Guest
I think I need a Jate fix... I miss them :'(
12/19/2020 c30 Guest
I’m obsessed with this story! Please please please update!
11/14/2020 c30 kev
I'll always love this story.
9/22/2020 c30 Guest
Lost premiered 16 years ago and changed the way of making TV forever. I miss Jack and everyone so, so much.
Thanks for sharing your stories, you are great :-)
8/23/2020 c30 Guest
I thought you'd abandonned this for good! But, I guess, like Jack, you thought, "I have to go back!'
I love this story, it's one of the best pieces of Lost fanfic out there, so well written, you know these characters inside out and it shows. Can't wait for the next chapter, brother!
8/13/2020 c30 Sara
Thank you for posting! I really love this story and I enjoyed this chapter a lot. The way Jack feels Kate with every cell of his body and needs her even though he wishes she could stay away is beautifully portrayed.
I'm loving the drama and of course Jacob needed to go but I'm still hoping that Jack will have a right to choose. And how you ended with such a cliffhanger...
8/1/2020 c30 Guest
I love the parts: "-Don't do that -What? -That" and "-Are you with me on this? -Yes" They are two of my top ten Jate moments, where frustration, pain, care and loyalty are mixed with pure love.
Thanks for updating, I needed this today. You are awesome!
7/31/2020 c30 Guest
Finally you're back! I really missed this, it's a beautiful work! I enjoy your storytelling and all the references to the show. It's like a rewatch and I love it. Plus, it's a perfect way to explore jate feelings and interactions.
I love how you write the Kate's POV in this chapter, the fact she's not ready to lose Jack to the Island ( Season Six in all the feels) and the Jack's confusion and guilt about Kate as well.
7/30/2020 c30 M
I'm so glad to read you! Such a joy!
Lovely, awesome work as always! Looking forward to more, thanks :-)
7/30/2020 c30 Guest
Thank you, thank you :-*
7/22/2020 c29 Guest
I love this so much. I love this incredible journey, love these characters and the way you write them.
1/10/2020 c29 Guest
I do love your writing. You make characters justice. I really hope you'll come back to this someday.
Thank you for writing and sharing, happy new year :-*
3/16/2019 c29 Guest
This story is so amazing, full of details and references, such a beautiful read! I hope you're doing OK and you will keep writing.
8/25/2018 c29 Guest
Awesome work!
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