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5/6 c12 1BloopdeBoop
I hate you. I hate you so much. I read Lord of the Flies right, and I was like "yeah people have deffo written some fanfics about Jack and Ralph, I wonder what's there :)" and I went to read them. Most of them were pretty bad, some were ok. And that was exactly what I expected. And that's could have been it. I would have been content, satisfied. But no. No no no no no. I found this fic. This. Fucking. Fic. This fanfic. THIS ONE FIC. This is arguably the best fic I have EVER read about something I know about. This fic came into my house, slammed me into the floor and made me it's bitch. I cannot stop coming back to it. It's always there. You've ruined me. You've absolutely ruined me. I will never be the same. You could've just not written an amazing fic about fucking Lord of the Flies which is like 500 years old. Do you see people writing love stories between characters in Hamlet ? You couldve not decided to write this beautiful story about something sO WEIRD AND NICHE. BUT YOU DID AND I AM NOW A HUSK AND A SHELL IF WHAT I ONCE WAS. I love it and I hate it so much and I don't know whether to slap you or marry you.
3/19 c12 Guest
i dont know if youre planning to continue this but i hope you are.. its such a gem i finished it in one reading
10/18/2020 c12 Abby Russo
Been a while, but I've loved this fanfic for so long. When I heard it had been updated, I was so excited. Fantastic chapter!
9/1/2020 c12 yaniiibee
but what happens with eric and roger?
5/12/2020 c4 Guest
Very good I am enjoying
5/12/2020 c11 Guest
Not even exaggerating, when I saw that this had updated I actually teared up! This is, without a doubt, my favorite piece of fanfiction ever and honestly means the world to me! Thank you so much for giving us new, beautiful content and I am eagerly awaiting the next update!
4/16/2020 c12 1lorelaismonkeylamp
Wahhhhh I love it! Please update! :)
3/26/2020 c6 Guest
Good, it’s so good, but Simon‘s brother, Piggy’s aunt. IT‘S CRUSHING MY HEART STOP!
1/5/2020 c12 Jess
EXCELLENT CHAPTER STUNNING MARVELOUS MAGNIFICENT. Thank you for uploading :’))) love the line about Jack always liking Ralph. Its been years and I still come back and reread. I eagerly await the next!
11/18/2019 c12 9HitTheRoad
I cannot believe you have updated this, I thought I would never see any chapter of this jewel ever again and then here you are after years of longing. I have read this story more than ten times ever since I discovered the Lord of the Flies fandom almost four years ago and I have to say that this is my all-time favorite story of this fandom. The new chapter did not disappoint, I always love the spicy interactions between Jack and Ralph and I especially love the part where they acknowledge their belligerent slap-slap-kiss dynamic ("You never said that you liked me for being some ruddy pushover" lmao). And did Jack's father have something going on for Ralph's mom? Wouldn't surprise me.
I hope to see more of this in the future. Thank you.
11/6/2019 c12 The Sorrowful Deity
Now that Ralph knows he can mess with Jack's head (and dick) he'll have some fun lol
10/11/2019 c12 3The Sapphire Prodigy
I’m happy that you have updated. It’s been a long time. I really missed Ralph and Jack.
10/8/2019 c12 my log doesn't judge
Okay but how is this even real? I've read it last night and since then couldn't wrap my head around the fact that you've actually updated
Should I even mention that I never really got over the fact that it wasn't completed? oh, the pain was real
I don't want to set my hopes too high, but whatever you decide to do next, I want you to know that I am forever grateful for this wild ride of a fic, I've been returning to it from time to time and it never lost any charm for me. And thank you for this chapter specifically, it was so warm and hopeful yet heartbreaking and kinda dreamy and everything we could wish for, indeed a brief escapade from all the messiness of everyday to where you can breathe freely, now I kinda dread the return to the reality, also really hope it'll happen, aaahh I'm already that invested but in no way want to put pressure on you
Oh and also thanks to you I've really advanced in my English, when I first started reading it in 2016 I had to look up every other word, but the writing kept me invested till the very end
Okay, enough rambling, thank you again, hope you're doing well, really really glad to hear from you again
10/6/2019 c12 Guest
THIS WAS AMAZING. YOU CANT BELIEVE HOW HAPPY I AM THAT YOU POSTED AGAIN. I first read this story back in 2013 and it has stuck with me through all these years. I’m absolutely ecstatic. This is one of my favourite fan fictions of all time.
6/7/2019 c11 CorgiButtz
I WISH THERE WAS MORE AND I KNOW YOU WONT SEE THIS BUT GOD I WANT MORE OKAY? IT WAS A GREAT READ 3
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