4/9/2017 c14 bookgirl113
I love Char, but he is so self-righteous sometimes! Probably comes from being royalty tbh.
I love Char, but he is so self-righteous sometimes! Probably comes from being royalty tbh.
2/23/2016 c6 andjelija.nenic
Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&???%%%$$$
Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&???%%%$$$
2/2/2016 c2 CallmeSuzanne
Hey! I've just started your story and I must say that it is an nteresting beginning. You seem to really, really like getting review so here it is. Sorry for its shortness but I want to continue reading :)
Hey! I've just started your story and I must say that it is an nteresting beginning. You seem to really, really like getting review so here it is. Sorry for its shortness but I want to continue reading :)
8/5/2015 c22 Julia
I loved it, and couldn't stop reading. I did, however, notice a few spots where it was dull - mostly because Emlyn hadn't been quite developed yet and beause Char was a bit OOC. I understand that he was under pressure and tension, but I thought I'd put it out there. The storyline was interesting and engaging, though I was kind of disappointed because I'm a Char fangirl. It was a great story. Keep it up! :D
I loved it, and couldn't stop reading. I did, however, notice a few spots where it was dull - mostly because Emlyn hadn't been quite developed yet and beause Char was a bit OOC. I understand that he was under pressure and tension, but I thought I'd put it out there. The storyline was interesting and engaging, though I was kind of disappointed because I'm a Char fangirl. It was a great story. Keep it up! :D
7/29/2015 c2 Guest
I love this idea of a what if char had caught her! Please keep it up! Even though I'm only on chapter 2 I love it! Thanks so much for writting it!
I love this idea of a what if char had caught her! Please keep it up! Even though I'm only on chapter 2 I love it! Thanks so much for writting it!
4/12/2015 c21 2Lana Wickford
Nooo. You did a good job with Ella and Emlyn, I will definitely give you that. They seemed to fit, the way you wrote this. I am a Char/Ella person in the heart, so naturally, I am a little disappointed. I still want to give you good credits thought! It was a great story idea.
Nooo. You did a good job with Ella and Emlyn, I will definitely give you that. They seemed to fit, the way you wrote this. I am a Char/Ella person in the heart, so naturally, I am a little disappointed. I still want to give you good credits thought! It was a great story idea.
4/25/2014 c5 3msydstery
I love your writing! I'm a big "Ella Enchanted" fan, I love the book. After I finished the book, I wanted more "Ella Enchanted", and your writing really quenches that thirst as much as it can possibly be quenched. But I must say, your writing is well-written and very enjoyable for the reader. Love it!
I love your writing! I'm a big "Ella Enchanted" fan, I love the book. After I finished the book, I wanted more "Ella Enchanted", and your writing really quenches that thirst as much as it can possibly be quenched. But I must say, your writing is well-written and very enjoyable for the reader. Love it!
4/23/2014 c21 Leia
OMG that was the best story EVER! Thank you so much for writing this story! I've thoroughly enjoyed reading it! I'll make sure to read your other stories! I am a HUGE Harry Potter fan! Lol :D
OMG that was the best story EVER! Thank you so much for writing this story! I've thoroughly enjoyed reading it! I'll make sure to read your other stories! I am a HUGE Harry Potter fan! Lol :D
4/23/2014 c15 Guest
Emlyn, definitely :)
Emlyn, definitely :)
4/17/2014 c21 tgurl620
I loved following your story and seeing where it would lead. Thank you for a good read :-). I hope your future stories are as exciting to read as this one.
I loved following your story and seeing where it would lead. Thank you for a good read :-). I hope your future stories are as exciting to read as this one.