7/24/2010 c1 Becker
Very nice. Mostly coherent, by Marv's standards, must have been on his pills that day.
Very nice. Mostly coherent, by Marv's standards, must have been on his pills that day.
7/7/2010 c1 16capyle
Great job. The brilliance of Silent Night was that you could basically hear Marv's monolouge without the benefoit of captions. And yet, you managed to pull it off while remaining true ot the story.
My only nitpick is that Marv used two guns in that story. One of them was probably Gladys but he had a second one, oddly enough.
Great job. The brilliance of Silent Night was that you could basically hear Marv's monolouge without the benefoit of captions. And yet, you managed to pull it off while remaining true ot the story.
My only nitpick is that Marv used two guns in that story. One of them was probably Gladys but he had a second one, oddly enough.