11/17/2018 c5 A Person
So I take it this has been put off?
I mean if hasn't then hell yea- but it kinda seems like it has? It'd make sense, Eight years is a lotta time.
So I take it this has been put off?
I mean if hasn't then hell yea- but it kinda seems like it has? It'd make sense, Eight years is a lotta time.
12/3/2013 c4 ASDHJKL
OMFG MOOOOOOORE
OMFG MOOOOOOORE
7/3/2013 c4 4TyroAkira
I freaking love this! I demand moar! Also, could you make it a tad more romantic later? I would be really happy if you did. Great job and keep up the good work! :D
I freaking love this! I demand moar! Also, could you make it a tad more romantic later? I would be really happy if you did. Great job and keep up the good work! :D
9/18/2012 c4 Aly
It's really good! But what keeps messing me up is that you switch from first person to third person. Please fix this in your future chapters. Besides that good work, this is one of the few Prototype stories that are interesting. Keep it up!
It's really good! But what keeps messing me up is that you switch from first person to third person. Please fix this in your future chapters. Besides that good work, this is one of the few Prototype stories that are interesting. Keep it up!
7/31/2012 c4 2FollieOfMadness
Beth is now royally fucked the way I see it. Alex is injured, and she's a tasty morsal. "HEY GUYS! IT'S ALEX MERCER FORM EPICMEALTIME! NAD NOW IT'S TIME TO EAT A LITTLE AMERICAN HATING ENGLISH BITCH! WITH A TOPING OF BLOOD!"
I can just imagine him in a chief hat. XD
Good chapter.
Beth is now royally fucked the way I see it. Alex is injured, and she's a tasty morsal. "HEY GUYS! IT'S ALEX MERCER FORM EPICMEALTIME! NAD NOW IT'S TIME TO EAT A LITTLE AMERICAN HATING ENGLISH BITCH! WITH A TOPING OF BLOOD!"
I can just imagine him in a chief hat. XD
Good chapter.
7/31/2012 c3 FollieOfMadness
Awwww sheet yo. Beth be havin' nightmares up in dis. Like a boss.
Good chapter.
Awwww sheet yo. Beth be havin' nightmares up in dis. Like a boss.
Good chapter.
7/31/2012 c2 FollieOfMadness
I wonder if the Italian boss guy is going to be the first guy to die or something. Seems like it, "Holy mi-AH! HE'SA EATINGA ME MEATA BALLSA!" XD
Good chapter.
I wonder if the Italian boss guy is going to be the first guy to die or something. Seems like it, "Holy mi-AH! HE'SA EATINGA ME MEATA BALLSA!" XD
Good chapter.
7/31/2012 c1 FollieOfMadness
XD it's funny to see someone so openly attached to Mercer. It's kind of like she'll become his stalker. Or something.
Good chapter.
XD it's funny to see someone so openly attached to Mercer. It's kind of like she'll become his stalker. Or something.
Good chapter.