4/23/2014 c6 DwarvenSoldier
I just started reading a little bit ago but this is amazing, if the walking dead was ever discontinued and this carries on they could make your story a t.v. show
I just started reading a little bit ago but this is amazing, if the walking dead was ever discontinued and this carries on they could make your story a t.v. show
7/8/2013 c12 Guest
I'm loving this! It would be a shame to see it discontinued. Please update soon! :)
I'm loving this! It would be a shame to see it discontinued. Please update soon! :)
12/22/2011 c1 3Hespara
AMAZING! You wrote this yourself! I'm obssessed with Zombies and your the first one I've come across that is actually worth subscribing too. I want more! Your going on my favorites, Miss/or Mister!
AMAZING! You wrote this yourself! I'm obssessed with Zombies and your the first one I've come across that is actually worth subscribing too. I want more! Your going on my favorites, Miss/or Mister!
2/9/2011 c8 3jkryten2x4b
Interesting bit of backstory. It makes you care about the protaganists more. I like!
Interesting bit of backstory. It makes you care about the protaganists more. I like!
11/17/2010 c7 swiftswallow
I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed a lots been going on.
The story seems to have picked up pace a bit more which I am adoring and the character of Mason is amazing. I think with him in it you'll have a lot more conflict which wouldn't go amiss.
The only thing I'm sort of seeing which could count as criticise is how amazing Mel is. Sometimes we're being told how good she is without the evidence. I guess I'm being fussy but some evidence and some mistakes would be nice. It would also be nice some other characters had the ideas to give it more balance. I know Mel's meant to be the leader but that doesn't mean she always has to be right. However, like I said, I'm being fussy and the story is taking amazing shape.
I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed a lots been going on.
The story seems to have picked up pace a bit more which I am adoring and the character of Mason is amazing. I think with him in it you'll have a lot more conflict which wouldn't go amiss.
The only thing I'm sort of seeing which could count as criticise is how amazing Mel is. Sometimes we're being told how good she is without the evidence. I guess I'm being fussy but some evidence and some mistakes would be nice. It would also be nice some other characters had the ideas to give it more balance. I know Mel's meant to be the leader but that doesn't mean she always has to be right. However, like I said, I'm being fussy and the story is taking amazing shape.
9/20/2010 c6 jkryten2x4b
I really liked it. You're starting to develop the characters, but I'd like to get to know them a bit more. Keep up the good work!
I really liked it. You're starting to develop the characters, but I'd like to get to know them a bit more. Keep up the good work!
9/5/2010 c5 2Punisherstfu
I like it, especially the idea of being so far after the the outbreak. I think you've got a pretty good handle on post apocolyptic life especially the way they treat being bitten. Living on an overpass is really clever but I'm wondering if that wouldn't draw zombies from miles around until they massed underneath the overpass, but maybe that's just me and hey this is your story and I'm certain you will do great things with it. Keep up the good work and I look forward to future updates.
I like it, especially the idea of being so far after the the outbreak. I think you've got a pretty good handle on post apocolyptic life especially the way they treat being bitten. Living on an overpass is really clever but I'm wondering if that wouldn't draw zombies from miles around until they massed underneath the overpass, but maybe that's just me and hey this is your story and I'm certain you will do great things with it. Keep up the good work and I look forward to future updates.