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10/30/2020 c1 2TheLittleOven
Please write chapter four soon!
10/17/2020 c2 TheLittleOven
I love how they argue about wether round up or not. Very good chapter, and I love every time you add humorous parts of the different main characters to this story.
10/17/2020 c3 TheLittleOven
Good job! I really like this story and can’t wait to find out how their plan works!
6/8/2020 c3 Guest
Oh no, here I am again... I honestly absolutely love this fic and re-read it every couple of months when I see Cillian Murphy getting beaten up in Peaky Blinders again. :D For some reason his characters are so... whumpable? and especially with Robert Fischer there's this element of 'spoiled brat that needs to be taken down a notch' which I really enjoy as a trope when there's a responsible spanker involved.
So, um... I just wanted to tell you once more how great your story is, and that I really enjoy the dynamic that you're building between them - this careful, yet also stern approach everyone has to Fischer being their responsibility is such a wonderful concept.
6/13/2019 c3 Guest
Oh my god? You added another chapter? My prayers have been answered! :D No seriously, I decided to read this fic again because I really liked it and finding out that you wrote more made my day!
It’s so funny reading how they’re all complaining because kidnapping is SO hard and Robert is SO awful. (Is he though? I feel sorry for him, since I hate being sick and your writing style is quite authentic.) Also I love the banter between Ariadne, Arthur and Eames – very amusing.
Eames suggesting that they braid each other’s hair and eat cookies? I fully support that. Absolutely, great idea.
Buuut then we’re back to the sad part and Robert being lonely and damaged, and to be fair, I like that as well. The more he’s hurt the more he can heal later on and I look forward to that.
Oh, Eames is such a hero for taking care of the “pretty boy”. Yes, clearly he’s the only one capable of keeping Robert in line… (The way he talks to him reminds me of a naughty puppy: “Calling out to us like a good boy”. And eat that, don’t leave the room! Not that I’m complaining…)
The one paragraph of Eames ranting about proper tea? Hilarious! I’m sure Robert is very concerned with that issue, too.
Eames is like a very aggressive tender caretaker. “Watch how good I am of getting the spoiled brat healthy again! Hah! I’m the best!” I love it and it’s so entertaining to read.
And yessss, there’s the spanking! I’m so happy about that! (Bonus points because Eames is ‘nice’ and explains to Robert what he’s doing in that moment; I enjoy reading a little bit of humiliation. Also the manhandling is pretty nice.)
Aw, Eames actually stays with him! He is a big softie after all…
I’m really looking forward to more! Thank you for writing (and updating) this wonderful fic!
Kudos!
5/14/2019 c1 Guest
I’ve only just watched Inception (shame on me for not watching it sooner) and the first thing that came into my mind was if there were any angsty fanfics including Fischer. Because there isn’t much Inception fanfics, I doubted I would be able to actually find any good fanfics however, this fanfic was a surprise. I absolutely adore it! It’s exactly what I wanted/ needed in my life!

The way you describe Fischer as a stubborn yet lonely man in a vulnerable state, is amazing. It’s such a well written story to, and is strictured perfectly.
I also never thought I’d ship Fischer and Eames together but this fic is making me question everything!

I see that you have left it on two chapter for years but have recently come back, which is awesome because this is such a good fic. Anyways, I’m looking forward to reading more of this! Kudos! :)
11/25/2018 c2 Guest
Hello!

So I just found this story because I was in the mood for some spanking fics and I remembered your username – turns out you wrote some of the ones that I’ve actually read before! (I definitely remember the one about Lance, Sweets and Brannon and some of your White Collar- fanfictions.) So yeah, I found your website again and I realised that you wrote something for Inception? (Which is kind of a dead fandom, now in 2018 but I still enjoy reading about it.) Aaand then I clicked on your fic and… it had two chapters. Which is great because two chapters are more than one chapter, but… I would love to read more as it seems like you might have planned out chapters following this one? No pressure though, I know that life and muse don’t always work together well.

What I loved about your story:

- So much angst! And it fits so perfectly into the whole scenario – the atmosphere feels very realistic and true tot he film.
- Robert Fischer. I love how he tries so hard not to show his emotions at the beginning. He’s such a stoic character and it’s great to see him this challenged by not trusting any of the people around him. And then his attitude completely changes when he gets sicker and sicker; it’s interesting to follow this change and him being forced into submitting to/trusting them.
- The whole sickness idea? Brilliant. As readers we don’t just get an insight into Robert but how Cobb, Eames, Arthur and Ariadne deal with the situation – which makes for a great way to show their personality in a subtle yet important way.
- Eames‘ disapporval is so entertaining to read! (Am I sensing a grouchy caretaker here? Mhh…)
- I loved the scene where it becomes apparent how lonely Robert actually is. Like, how he flinches away from Cobb when he tries to touch him or when he says that nobody takes care of him. (It only adds to the angst, hehe.)

Also I mentioned this before but I’m going to say it again: I totally here for the corporal punishment in your stories and I think you’re really talented in making it seem authentic and convincing as a real part of the plot. So I would be on board with Cobb or Eames (or anyone) spanking Robert aka ?the spoiled rich boy“… just saying.
Hope you had a good week!
11/28/2011 c2 14Kiraling
I really with you would finish this story, it's very interesting and well written! Poor baby Robert, I just wanna squeeze him to death! *is feeling motherly*
8/23/2011 c2 6ninjapoke
ok this is awesome. the plot is fantastic! Are you going to continue it? Cuz your should. Poor Robert... he just wants somebody to care... and to be warm. Anywho, i love this. Please of please oh please write more.
1/1/2011 c2 Guest
d'awwh. he is kind of cute. I loved that Eames was calling him a wanker. Hehehe! it's a good story.

side note: since you haven't apparently made the slashing clear yet, EAMES X FISCHER PLZKTHXBYE. :D

keep updating!
12/29/2010 c2 Allison
Interesting story! I'm eager to find out where this goes. Please update soon!
11/11/2010 c2 17terracannon876
I'm really eager to read the continuation of this fic =3 I'd love to see how Robert works into the team dynamic, or as he watches them interact, what he thinks. Poor guy XD

Thanks for the fic! Hope you update soon!
11/3/2010 c2 SlaveToLiterature
Yay :D Inception fanfics. I loved inception and you're the first fanfic I read. Even though it's only a start, I'm interested. Robert bashing is nice. I liked him a lot. He's really the spoiled rich kid with bad childhood and maybe some traumas somewhere. I like :).

I'm curious about this fic, so I'll put you on story alert. Hope an update comes soon,

Greetings
11/2/2010 c2 Id
This is very intriguing. I very much liked your first two chapters and am excited for where you'll take this next. All the characters are IC and your writing is captivating. I especially enjoyed the way you depicted Robert's mind throughout the whole ordeal; jumping from delirium to memories, it was very convincing and emotional (for me at least). I look forward to your next chapter!
10/5/2010 c2 1TatianaOnegina
woohoo! new chapter! you make me SO happy ^_^

aww cute Robert 3 3 (and his mr. Charles)

I like all personages: heartless Eames, sweet Ariadne etc

TY again for gorgeous fic!
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