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8/25/2020 c23 1MissingCancelledShows
I started this story a long time agomaybe in high school!and just re-read and finished it (recently returned to my old FanFiction account). Such a beautiful ending to a beautiful story. Thank you for sharing!
1/3/2017 c22 tin-a-holic
Wow! So first off I was mad at myself that I didn't see this story updated till November. Second frustrated that i didn't get a chance to reread it and the new chapters till now. Wow! This last chapter especially was amazing! A cleansing by kisses sooooo powerful! Wow. I'm kinda speechless. Seriously I've enjoyed this story for a few years now revisiting it several times and I love the last two chapters, especially that last scene-it was so powerful and raw. Just loved it. Very nicely done
11/25/2016 c2 1Steampunked
I'm liking this!
8/21/2015 c20 Kidda
I am so glad to see this story updated. Please keep up the good work.
8/20/2015 c20 tin-a-holic
Oh my lucky stars, a new chapter! More yummy yummy goodness for me, and I guess everyone else too ;) and what a wonderful holiday season it will be for both of us; I get a wonderful story and you get a gift that is beyond priceless! Thank you and I wish you lots and lots of patience!
8/19/2015 c20 Ashendove
I'm very happy you're continuing the story. :) So many of my favorite fanfictions sit unfinished as I forlornly keep checking back hoping that one day they'll continue. I look forward to reading the rest of the story.
8/11/2015 c19 tin-a-holic
Awe family time! Imso curious as to where you are going to be taking this story. I hope your computer crashes have not detoured you from this story. I am kinda wondering where you were going with this story and where you are going to go with it :) thank you so much for sharing and keep being creative!
8/11/2015 c18 tin-a-holic
Oh shut up this was so cute and sweet!
8/11/2015 c17 tin-a-holic
Oh man I feel for you losing all of your work. Major bummer! Im thrilled you decided to resume this lovely az struggling with her feelings. I simply adore your take on her, so, freaking, amazing!

And side note and tmi; even though my comments have absolutely no bearing in what you have already posted knowing our delicious tannen is tall dark and handsome with delicious brown eyes has got me changing my panties, im just saying nicely done ;) im sorry for the tmi but good flanst has my reading muse-smuterlla- think and say things... ;)
8/11/2015 c13 tin-a-holic
Awe soooo cute! I love how blunt az is when she tells tannen he makes her stomach do funny things:) soooooo adorable!

By the way the last comment was from me too. I have no idea why it didn't log in as me- Tinaholic (just in case it doesn't post correctly)ahh the blessings of technology;)
8/11/2015 c12 Guest
Oh man I am so loving this story; all of the flangst, yummy! I'm not exactly sure when you posted your AN on the last few chapters but I have a feeling you are probably being a lot harder on yourself than how yummy your story is/ was. It's really wonderful especially you delving into azkadellia. And I love tannen. I'm still deciding which actor I picture portraying him...(I say a little deviously...)
8/11/2015 c7 tin-a-holic
Okay so I was under the impression that I read most of the tinman stories on this site, and how pleasntly surprised I was to find this story. I am loving it. I am really enjoying this other character you have created. although I am hoping that in the next few chapters if you give a little bit more of the physical description on him. It's because I would like to know how to properly fantasize about this new character. :-)
3/7/2015 c19 sevf77
I love this story. I hope you continue to add to it when you can. This is my 3rd or 4th rime reading it through, just hoping you added something new. Hugs.
1/6/2015 c19 Guest
finally! I was afraid that you had abandoned this! thank you so much for continuing! :)
1/4/2015 c19 Ashendove
Thank you for continuing! I look forward to more, as usual.
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