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11/26/2011 c2 3JuNjOuSeKaIiChIlOvErYaOi
I hope you make another update soon^^
11/26/2011 c1 JuNjOuSeKaIiChIlOvErYaOi
Thanks for making a fanfic about my favorite couple in Honey Hunt (HarukaxYura=?) Maybe when I finish my other fanfic I'll write one for Honey Hunt^^ Anyways I loved the first chspter! =)
9/5/2011 c2 Iceychiida
[ Separate comments for chapter two ~ Woohoo ]

Poor Yura. She seems kinda intimidated by the judges, and the not-judge. I can't wait to hear about this story between Laiyr and Amaya. It sounds like I'm gonna cry. Can't wait to read the next chapters. ~
9/5/2011 c1 Iceychiida
Hmmm, Haruka ~ I love this pairing. I'm glad to see a fic of them.

His hate of fairy tales is really amusing. I really snapped into attention when he got his random questions. ( Ffff, wolf, really? Way to make me love him more. ) The description of the other characters is smooth, to the point, and creates a good image in my mind. Little notes about the atmosphere the character creates once and a while is nice. The way Haruka picks up how the scene should feel is well thought out. I can't help but laugh at how he's practically kicked out of the room. Nice.

Don't think there is really any criticism I could give you. Maybe the point of reading it over after a good gap of time, or having someone check it for you. Just so any weird sentences actually appear weird to you, and you can find the little mistakes that can make a sentence clearer to the reader. Otherwise, nice work, and I can't wait to read more. ~
8/21/2011 c2 20Shadow Silvertongue
this is a good story, both chapters are. i look forward to reading more (if u are gonna write more that is) :D
7/23/2011 c2 6kataragurl27
i like it
6/21/2011 c2 HikariKotoneLyrics
wow!nice story.i love the way you describe everything.i sure hope this is a HarukaXYura fanfic.ohh,why did they pair up Q-ta with her?Haruka is way better.My favourite manga chapter so far is 15.
5/25/2011 c1 Enomoto
Please please update soon! =p
5/1/2011 c2 1WhipmyHair24
cool start.

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