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12/25/2017 c1 1FrayWrites
mmmm :3 how sweet
6/9/2016 c1 Arw165
It was easy too read, but I felt the need to comment on some things...
1. Simply technical remark - what give it M raiting when it could be T or lower? M ranked stories are hidden to readers unless they unlock them while searching. That makes the story harder to find/notice etc.

2. I have to admit I'm more Naruto-person and I tend to take his side on most things, but honestly - I'm torn. We see only one serious argument and Naruto talking about his feelings, blaming them on Sasuke, but I can't verify who's wrong based only on words. Because from my point of view, as a reader, this fight is basically word against word and I don't know who to believe. I can't find Naruto's accusations true, only because what he says about Sasuke sounds like sth the raven could do. I find their confrontation lacking and only Sasuke's lack of retaliation convinces me, that maybe he was in the wrong after all. Narutoshould've pointed out some specific events, which made him so desperate, instead of just sharing his general feels about the dynamics of their relationship.
So, I think you could have added some more details during the argument or start the whole story earlier, so we could see what caused the problem ourselves.
8/8/2015 c2 1Kays3r
I love playing Gin Rummy! Lol although my family just calls it Rummy. Cute story, love uke Sasuke /heart eyes/
5/14/2015 c2 BlackKiryuu
That was sooo damn amazing!
I love their set-ups.
4/18/2014 c1 1LouiseUchiha
It was very heartbreaking at the beginning but then I was... so cute Sasu :3
10/5/2013 c2 hikora
Haaaaa. I'm so glad that they managed to work things out. Things like that better not happen again. But I love it.
6/22/2013 c1 jj
I don't get the last two sentences but nicly done
6/7/2013 c2 ImagineYou
From the rules and guidelines of this site:

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Please move this author's note to your profile page. The guidelines are made for a reason, and should be followed by everyone.

Thanks! :)
6/4/2013 c2 1downforgottenpride
This plot of yours is a rare sight to the world of Naruto fanfic, and it was bemusing how you created this story so well.
6/3/2013 c2 Apollymi28
I understand. Don't worry about it.
12/22/2012 c1 AngelBaybeh
This was so beautiful I cried so much and decided to listen to the song while crying 3 Thanks for the amazing story. I'm glad your grammar is good. :)
2/25/2012 c1 12She.Drowned.In.Venom
Thank GOD that didn't end sad! PHEW! lol
5/31/2011 c1 MidnightGolds
I don't normally review stories, but I had to tell you how good I thought this was. Most Sasuke/Naruto stories are all sex and no plot, but yours had meat, like my english teacher always used to say and it was great. I really, really, really hope you do a sequel (hint hint :) ) .
5/29/2011 c1 Momoiro Murasaki
I actually don't review on stories cz I'm one of them people that creates account to just read and fav stories so they can read back to them again. So why did I review this story? Simple, it's because this story is really touching and emotional. I love the plot and the wording throughout the story. I also love the ending and jut overall love how you've structured the story well :) I don't even know why this has got so little reviews when it's actually a good story!

I'd love a sequel for this though ;) hope you can consider this request of mine :) Onegai! *puppy eyes*

Keep up the good work!

~ Monoiro Murasaki ~
5/6/2011 c1 12Stupid Cow
Oh my god. You made me cry. Like. A lot. Really.

/wipes tears.

That was freaking sweet. That speech Sasuke gave. I can really imagine it.
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