9/18/2012 c1 1SlippyMagnus
It seems like you've got the FEEL of the original comic down, what with the fighting, and such, but i wish that you had left out the dialogue, as in the original.
By the way, how do you submit stories (and get them to STAY) on the site?
It seems like you've got the FEEL of the original comic down, what with the fighting, and such, but i wish that you had left out the dialogue, as in the original.
By the way, how do you submit stories (and get them to STAY) on the site?
12/12/2011 c1 2SEGASister
You should continue this:
Probably have both perspectives view each mission now that its known that White is a-HOT-chick. ;-)
You should continue this:
Probably have both perspectives view each mission now that its known that White is a-HOT-chick. ;-)
11/11/2011 c1 fite585
You are a good author. i'm going to read some of your other stories now. good job...keep writing!
You are a good author. i'm going to read some of your other stories now. good job...keep writing!