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4/5/2017 c1 Mogie Man
Very creative!
10/19/2009 c1 2pamelamorganhalpert
that was adorable! i laughed so hard when i realized they had both gone to visit the other - at the same time and would be 128 miles away... still! lol.

great job describing them trying to sleep w/o the other - very acurate sounding and descriptive.

my only suggestion - try to work on the dialogue, maybe say it out loud while you write, i didn't think it flowed as well as the other writing in this chapter.

nice job and continue, this is really good!
10/19/2009 c1 officejam
aww this was soo cute! too bad they didn't actually see each other:P

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