6/6/2020 c4 21daianapotter
Vaya, así que acá aizen quería hacer reina a orihime. Será interesante ver a orihime pelear contra ichigo y que lo derrote xd
Vaya, así que acá aizen quería hacer reina a orihime. Será interesante ver a orihime pelear contra ichigo y que lo derrote xd
6/6/2020 c3 daianapotter
Pues si, al final rukia fue capitana.
Me encanta la familia de ichigo n.n seguro que cuando le dieron la noticia de que eran pareja se alegraron mucho :) isshin no pararía de decir que su hijo por fin se hizo hombre xd
Me encantan lo competitivos que son jajaja xd
Pues si, al final rukia fue capitana.
Me encanta la familia de ichigo n.n seguro que cuando le dieron la noticia de que eran pareja se alegraron mucho :) isshin no pararía de decir que su hijo por fin se hizo hombre xd
Me encantan lo competitivos que son jajaja xd
6/5/2020 c1 daianapotter
Muy lindo estos dos n.n lo que si, sería bueno que hicieras más parrafos así no queda todo amontonado
Muy lindo estos dos n.n lo que si, sería bueno que hicieras más parrafos así no queda todo amontonado
6/8/2013 c5 Guest
It's NOT time reversal they said that. Grimmjow see how I spelled it that is how it's spelled and GRIMMJOW does not use than that it was good.
It's NOT time reversal they said that. Grimmjow see how I spelled it that is how it's spelled and GRIMMJOW does not use than that it was good.
3/10/2013 c7 13Getsuga TENSHOU 15
I enjoyed it, I thought it was an awesome read :) once you get round to improving it, it would clear up some confusion, but it's still an enjoyable read even without improvements c:
I enjoyed it, I thought it was an awesome read :) once you get round to improving it, it would clear up some confusion, but it's still an enjoyable read even without improvements c:
1/4/2013 c5 Guest
Shit, this totally sucked. You're story sucked girl. I think, you're too little to write stories, there's immaturity seen in ur story line. Observe how other stories are written. Don't just write things as you please. But I admire ur guts for uploading a story LIKE THIS. No offense girl. I'm just being honest. Hope you understand the meaning behind my harsh words.
Shit, this totally sucked. You're story sucked girl. I think, you're too little to write stories, there's immaturity seen in ur story line. Observe how other stories are written. Don't just write things as you please. But I admire ur guts for uploading a story LIKE THIS. No offense girl. I'm just being honest. Hope you understand the meaning behind my harsh words.