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8/13 c4 Betty Fallon
Looking forward to the next chapter!This is really a well written story!
8/12 c1 Betty Fallon
Love it!
1/30 c5 3pirateofpenzance
Wow I adore this! So much better written than what we got in the show haha. I loved the worf/ troi interaction - they’re “the aliens” of the bridge crew and I liked that your conversation included a bit of that. Crusher is adding a really nice element to everything as well. Thank you!
8/25/2020 c5 MaxiP99
Love this story keep it going !
6/2/2020 c5 Guest
This fic is absolutely amazing! Such an incredibly interesting take on the premise of this ep; I’m totally riveted and can’t wait to see where it goes next. The characterization is so so good - nearly every piece of dialogue I can *hear* in each character’s tone of voice and phrasing. That’s no easy task with this franchise, either. I’m just blown away by how similar but *new* this feels and I couldn’t be happier to have found it.

The nuance you’ve given Worf in this chapter is so good and valid. I was feeling livid and outraged along with Deanna and then you went and made it feel so real that I even felt guilty after reading through. That’s a really tough narrative to sell effectively and you’ve done such a great job of it here.

Similarly (because I read all 5 chapters in one sitting bc I cannot be stopped), I spent a lot of time being frustrated with Riker for not just stepping up for Deanna only to have that be such an important part of his own narrative in getting where he needed to be, to say the things he needed to say. I find myself in his shoes, also yearning for the baby they could’ve had. Listen I’m all-in on whatever you want to do here because it’s so wonderful, but my whole heart and body are aching for Dad Riker! Just putting that out there. Temporary adoptive father or bio dad down the road, I’m not picky at all...I just very much want to see soft Will loving his family unendingly and getting those soft domestic experiences... ;)

Godddd this whole thing is just so good! The tenderness and protectiveness from Deanna, the instability of her hormones and emotional swings as she reacts and adjusts to her new world. The overwhelming sadness and frustration at the thought of being pulled away from her home by Starfleet. (I ALSO love/want more of Will reacting to that whole situation and her feelings about it - it’s so good and layered and interesting!) The soft but firm constancy of Beverly’s friendship and counsel. The steadfastness and curiousness of Picard. It’s just all so so good. And the moments between Will and Deanna, their love and their uncertainties and their mutual safe haven of each other? *chef’s kiss* I can’t wait for the next installment!
5/3/2020 c5 astacia
Love this story. The Child is one of my favorite stories and I love your version of it and of having Will more involved...hope to see more soon.
4/12/2020 c5 5twinmuse
I love this episode and absolutely love ur version...especially Crusher there instead...reading fanfics is a great escape from the reality we're in right now...especially for me, an essential worker fighting the craziness out there and for my twin sis, a nurse. I hope u update soon!

~Colly E of twin*muse
3/16/2020 c5 farscape
Is chapter 5 the end of the fic, or is there more to come?
12/20/2019 c5 19DimpleCurlAeternaGirl
Just a minor note: I always wondered why Lwaxana Troi, Deanna's colorful, over-zealous mother, never mentioned her grandson. I understand it would have pulled focus from other episodes, but her character is much too strong and passionate to let her grandson become a footnote in the annals of TNG canon.
12/20/2019 c5 DimpleCurlAeternaGirl
Great story! I love this way more than the episode. It's well-written, true to the characters, further explores the passion of my fav ST ship and has Dr. Crusher! (Not a fan of Pulaskifemale "Bones.I'm looking forward to your update!
12/19/2019 c5 2MonkaMoo
Thank you for this new chapter! I really like the way this story is going, and I'm excited to read more!
11/22/2019 c5 Maven
Always happy to see some Riker-Troi fic, but particularly glad you've returned to this one to do this episode some justice. Looking forward to the next chapter!
11/21/2019 c5 39WIWJ
What a surprise! I was so excited to read this chapter!i it didn’t disappoint!
11/17/2019 c5 srhuskey
I am so immensely happy you have picked up this story again! Well worth the wait!
11/17/2019 c5 6darkelf1313
I was so happy to get the new chapter alert! Glad to see this story hasnt been forgotten. I look forward to more in the future!
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