3/15/2012 c1 1PunkRockCows
That was great! Amazing story. I loved the whole thing. The end moved really quickly compared to the best, but it fit in nicely with his new lifestyle. I loved it.
That was great! Amazing story. I loved the whole thing. The end moved really quickly compared to the best, but it fit in nicely with his new lifestyle. I loved it.
8/16/2009 c1 19Cerulean City
Wow, that was so...touching, Q. I don't know anything about the characters, but I'm walking away feeling like I know everything about them.
I found only one minor error ("other's" should be "others") in the whole thing, so good job!
Moreplz?
:D
"May He Thunder Forever!"
~Your Husband
Wow, that was so...touching, Q. I don't know anything about the characters, but I'm walking away feeling like I know everything about them.
I found only one minor error ("other's" should be "others") in the whole thing, so good job!
Moreplz?
:D
"May He Thunder Forever!"
~Your Husband
6/18/2009 c1 3Rising Dusk
Wow. Lots of emotion. I loved it, Qzzy. :D It was so entrancing, and so stylistically well written. Good job. No. Splendid job. :D
~Natz
Wow. Lots of emotion. I loved it, Qzzy. :D It was so entrancing, and so stylistically well written. Good job. No. Splendid job. :D
~Natz