3/27/2011 c5 1Skillet78
Is it just me, or do you keep forgetting that your characters are supposed to be blind? I counted at least 10 instances where the characters get information that they wouldn't get otherwise in just this one chapter.
Is it just me, or do you keep forgetting that your characters are supposed to be blind? I counted at least 10 instances where the characters get information that they wouldn't get otherwise in just this one chapter.
3/15/2011 c26 300Dark-Pheonix00
I love it. Good job Abby. I love the new chapter you are a genius even though I helped you are still a Genius love it. Come find me I need to be tescued
I love it. Good job Abby. I love the new chapter you are a genius even though I helped you are still a Genius love it. Come find me I need to be tescued
3/13/2011 c4 2Tailsofthefairies
Observation:
you do not want to SEE her when she is hyper.
isn't this set in a blind school?
Observation:
you do not want to SEE her when she is hyper.
isn't this set in a blind school?
2/19/2011 c4 71Brambleshadow of WindClan
Kelsey reminds me of Abby Scuito, this forensic scientist on NCIS. She's this really talkative/hyper Goth - who can also murder you and leave NO forensic evidence. Love this, btw.
Oh, and, Eragon, are you so sure Brom wouldn't?
Kelsey reminds me of Abby Scuito, this forensic scientist on NCIS. She's this really talkative/hyper Goth - who can also murder you and leave NO forensic evidence. Love this, btw.
Oh, and, Eragon, are you so sure Brom wouldn't?
1/11/2011 c25 18Werefaerie120
! MORE I SAY MORE! (Quck Question-Aubree was feeling nauseous and stuff-I have a WILD guess, but is she pregnant? Just thinking of symptoms here! GOOOOOOODDD! I like how we get to see thorn and learn about his personality. Write!
! MORE I SAY MORE! (Quck Question-Aubree was feeling nauseous and stuff-I have a WILD guess, but is she pregnant? Just thinking of symptoms here! GOOOOOOODDD! I like how we get to see thorn and learn about his personality. Write!
4/1/2010 c19 Wttlewd
Well one thing is for sure...women are definitely better at persusasion then guys. Also AWESOME STORY!
Well one thing is for sure...women are definitely better at persusasion then guys. Also AWESOME STORY!
12/11/2009 c16 wolfdefender01
you are a freaking awesome writer! love it!
what was he going to take a away from her?
update soon please it is getting really good.
I love how you can project the story using imagery it is totally awesome and you should try and get your stories published! That would be so cool!
you are a freaking awesome writer! love it!
what was he going to take a away from her?
update soon please it is getting really good.
I love how you can project the story using imagery it is totally awesome and you should try and get your stories published! That would be so cool!
12/8/2009 c15 wolfdefender01
wow! you totally rewrote the books! I like it. You capture Eragon very well I must say.
update soon please!
wow! you totally rewrote the books! I like it. You capture Eragon very well I must say.
update soon please!