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11/8/2011 c29 2Wildflower210
More more more!
6/21/2011 c27 1Jmooseswag
awesome story! Hurry with the next one :)
3/27/2011 c5 1Skillet78
Is it just me, or do you keep forgetting that your characters are supposed to be blind? I counted at least 10 instances where the characters get information that they wouldn't get otherwise in just this one chapter.
3/15/2011 c26 300Dark-Pheonix00
I love it. Good job Abby. I love the new chapter you are a genius even though I helped you are still a Genius love it. Come find me I need to be tescued
3/13/2011 c4 2Tailsofthefairies
Observation:

you do not want to SEE her when she is hyper.

isn't this set in a blind school?
2/19/2011 c4 71Brambleshadow of WindClan
Kelsey reminds me of Abby Scuito, this forensic scientist on NCIS. She's this really talkative/hyper Goth - who can also murder you and leave NO forensic evidence. Love this, btw.

Oh, and, Eragon, are you so sure Brom wouldn't?
1/11/2011 c25 18Werefaerie120
! MORE I SAY MORE! (Quck Question-Aubree was feeling nauseous and stuff-I have a WILD guess, but is she pregnant? Just thinking of symptoms here! GOOOOOOODDD! I like how we get to see thorn and learn about his personality. Write!
12/5/2010 c24 Obliterator1519
i like this story suprissed that u dont have more reviews
7/9/2010 c4 5Celebel Svit-kona
Isn't Eragon a vegetarian also?
7/9/2010 c2 Celebel Svit-kona
Oh, I like this a lot already.
4/1/2010 c19 Wttlewd
Well one thing is for sure...women are definitely better at persusasion then guys. Also AWESOME STORY!
2/18/2010 c18 4wolfdefender01
Awesome as always keep it up oh wise ones!
1/11/2010 c17 wolfdefender01
sweet! I sense a relationship forming.

good chapie! update soon plz!
12/11/2009 c16 wolfdefender01
you are a freaking awesome writer! love it!

what was he going to take a away from her?

update soon please it is getting really good.

I love how you can project the story using imagery it is totally awesome and you should try and get your stories published! That would be so cool!
12/8/2009 c15 wolfdefender01
wow! you totally rewrote the books! I like it. You capture Eragon very well I must say.

update soon please!
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