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4/16/2016 c1 40Lady Artimes Blaine
*giggles* I happened to quite like this. Now, I'll go read the story.
7/17/2015 c1 Yadda Wadda BaddaBoom
thoroughly enjoyed this, great job! looking forward to reading your sequel :-)
3/28/2008 c1 n e v e r quite l i k e this
Hm... this was very interesting. I actually liked it; I think you conveyed emotions well - it was really sad for Anastacia to loose Rasler; I think this was really well written. As for her being Mary Sue-ish... eh I don't think she was. I mean it wasn't as if you wrote her as like perfectly beautiful or with all these special powers or something. So I think it was good. =]

Lol, sorry if that's a crappy review. I'm terrible at reviewing. XD

Peace,

Courtney
2/24/2008 c1 Hakkai'sHerFavorite
I really enjoyed it! I didn't really get that much of a Sue vibe at all! Of course, it depends on the reader and the author both, and there's nothing you can do if one of your readers decides that their own mental image of Anastacia is perfect- but I got a very real character's image in my head for this fic, and hopefully you'll be able to form an entire cast of characters that an audience can relate to.

Remember that the characters already in canon need to have their personalities developed just as much as your OC, even if the audience already knows them completely, because those are also a part of your cast!

I'll keep reading Hide-and-Seek (what a great theme!) and good luck!

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