11/1/2016 c1 Krylo-Ren
This is cute but the speech seems complex for 6 year olds
This is cute but the speech seems complex for 6 year olds
11/2/2016 c1 6Ryuubi blackheart
It's not bad, In fact it's good very good, won't lie better then the first one.
Now, With that being said, I wouldn't worry about writing it from the view of a six year old because the six year old has gone through abuse, So her thinking would above that, of a ordinary six year old.
The pace is good, So don't worry about that either, However don't, Jump into the killings so quickly.
With that said, I look forward to the complete, Rewrite.
It's not bad, In fact it's good very good, won't lie better then the first one.
Now, With that being said, I wouldn't worry about writing it from the view of a six year old because the six year old has gone through abuse, So her thinking would above that, of a ordinary six year old.
The pace is good, So don't worry about that either, However don't, Jump into the killings so quickly.
With that said, I look forward to the complete, Rewrite.
7/16/2014 c16 BatRockerGirl
OMGG NUHH MICHAEL DON'T DO IETTT I LOVEE CHUUUUUUUUU
OMGG NUHH MICHAEL DON'T DO IETTT I LOVEE CHUUUUUUUUU
11/25/2012 c16 Hi
Wheres laurie
Wheres laurie
10/10/2012 c14 CrazyPerson2671
This is awsome! Also, putting the fact that Mike killed Aaron made my day.:)
This is awsome! Also, putting the fact that Mike killed Aaron made my day.:)
7/23/2012 c2 Guest
The only mistake I found in here was when your oc went " I may be small but I am small "
Lol or was that on purpose? ;p love your story
The only mistake I found in here was when your oc went " I may be small but I am small "
Lol or was that on purpose? ;p love your story
5/24/2010 c16 horrorfreak101
OMG! such a great story michaels so sweet my favourite chapter was when he proposed i gasped and cried LOL so sweet i really enjoyed this story :)
OMG! such a great story michaels so sweet my favourite chapter was when he proposed i gasped and cried LOL so sweet i really enjoyed this story :)
1/17/2010 c16 Bells
AH! -flipout- Love it! Love the whole thing. You lucky talented soul. I wish i could write. Onto the sequel!
AH! -flipout- Love it! Love the whole thing. You lucky talented soul. I wish i could write. Onto the sequel!