3/2/2016 c1 4JPPFox
Wow! That is a good story. Of course I probably had a different view than when it was written, because i was 3. But It was detailed plain, and just phenomenal, and i know phenomenal. I like how it used excerts from the strip. definitely a good touch. A lot of the fanfics i have read are pretty good, but this one was the creme de la creme, the best of the best. Please continue this series, I enjoy it alot.
Wow! That is a good story. Of course I probably had a different view than when it was written, because i was 3. But It was detailed plain, and just phenomenal, and i know phenomenal. I like how it used excerts from the strip. definitely a good touch. A lot of the fanfics i have read are pretty good, but this one was the creme de la creme, the best of the best. Please continue this series, I enjoy it alot.
6/8/2015 c1 Padfoot Rocks
This sucks
This sucks
12/22/2013 c1 Foxfreak
Continue pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaassssssssseeeeeebeee
Continue pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaassssssssseeeeeebeee
8/28/2010 c1 2Stephen2462
I can see Jason changing a little, but not as much as you described. You don't go from being a super-nerd to a sports star just like that. Other then that it wasn't a bad story.
I can see Jason changing a little, but not as much as you described. You don't go from being a super-nerd to a sports star just like that. Other then that it wasn't a bad story.
1/29/2010 c1 10BobWritesTheFics
Hey, nice story. Very unique, writing about a comic book. But the end with Elien and Jackson seemed a bit rushed.
Just wanted to reveiw,
Beia
Hey, nice story. Very unique, writing about a comic book. But the end with Elien and Jackson seemed a bit rushed.
Just wanted to reveiw,
Beia
4/19/2009 c1 9RimaBalaBalance
I love it! It has everything the comics missing- Jason and Paige with people they love! XD LOL
I love it! It has everything the comics missing- Jason and Paige with people they love! XD LOL