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11/7/2014 c3 2VampireSiren
This is a wonderful chapter!
My only critique, however, is that you use the word "I" a little bit too much at the start of several sentences in a row. Other than that, you did a great job! :)
This is a wonderful chapter!
My only critique, however, is that you use the word "I" a little bit too much at the start of several sentences in a row. Other than that, you did a great job! :)
4/28/2014 c2 2Alexandria Volturi
This seems really interesting so far. Be sure to add more detail about the surroundings like bedroom, different rooms, ect.
Also since Liz meets Cain around the time he's still being abused by his father. Will Cain becomes very attached to Liz like he does with Riff?
Update soon please I look forward to reading more.
This seems really interesting so far. Be sure to add more detail about the surroundings like bedroom, different rooms, ect.
Also since Liz meets Cain around the time he's still being abused by his father. Will Cain becomes very attached to Liz like he does with Riff?
Update soon please I look forward to reading more.
3/30/2013 c17 2VampireSiren
Lol, no matter how many times I see/ read that scene where Mary flings the teddy bear at Cain, it's STILL freaking hilarious! Cracks me up every time! XD
Lol, no matter how many times I see/ read that scene where Mary flings the teddy bear at Cain, it's STILL freaking hilarious! Cracks me up every time! XD
3/30/2013 c5 VampireSiren
Gorgeous, simply gorgeous! I wonder how Mary and Liz will get along, though? I bet they'll become the best of friends...
Gorgeous, simply gorgeous! I wonder how Mary and Liz will get along, though? I bet they'll become the best of friends...