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9/10/2020 c3 1LeannaHime
Please update. I'm loving this story.
9/2/2018 c1 fyjaz
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11/7/2014 c3 2VampireSiren
This is a wonderful chapter!

My only critique, however, is that you use the word "I" a little bit too much at the start of several sentences in a row. Other than that, you did a great job! :)
11/7/2014 c3 Ignis76
Awesome :)
4/28/2014 c2 2Alexandria Volturi
This seems really interesting so far. Be sure to add more detail about the surroundings like bedroom, different rooms, ect.

Also since Liz meets Cain around the time he's still being abused by his father. Will Cain becomes very attached to Liz like he does with Riff?

Update soon please I look forward to reading more.
2/27/2014 c2 windwolf1988
Really cool fic I hope it gets an update
2/20/2014 c2 4RiverOfTheWolf
update please!
2/18/2014 c2 Ignis76
Still could use more detail but otherwise good :)
2/17/2014 c1 Ignis76
Looks good :D
3/30/2013 c17 2VampireSiren
Lol, no matter how many times I see/ read that scene where Mary flings the teddy bear at Cain, it's STILL freaking hilarious! Cracks me up every time! XD
3/30/2013 c15 VampireSiren
Ok, big shocker! Liz meets Cain's reincarnation! ? NOW I'M CURIOUS!
3/30/2013 c5 VampireSiren
Gorgeous, simply gorgeous! I wonder how Mary and Liz will get along, though? I bet they'll become the best of friends...
3/30/2013 c1 VampireSiren
Amazing! Keep up the good work! :)
3/30/2013 c25 VampireSiren
Please continue! Please, please, please, please, PLEASE! TT TT
1/10/2013 c25 Ignis76
Please please update soon!
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