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2/4 c1 25Lillian Smith
This looks very interesting. I love the way you've used the words hereā€”it's beautiful, especially the first line.
1/23 c4 Mrs. Moonlark
I love this story so much, and you have a fantastic writing style. Please continue the story as soon as possible!
7/11/2017 c4 HuntressXHunter
Please continue! This story is the only decent Peter/Oc so far, so PLEASE
5/7/2017 c4 sparrowflyz1212
YAY UR BACK THIS IS GOOD YES
4/23/2017 c4 Guest
YAAAAY THIS STORY IS AMAZING
4/18/2017 c5 Feathersky
I'm really glad you are able to continue and that you have worked so hard on this story! I'm excited to read what you have come up with! :)
3/1/2016 c4 BlacksSunflower
I'm glad that you will continue this story it's really good
12/27/2015 c4 8bleachTG.GC
Really cant wait for the chapters to come!
2/14/2015 c4 32Onyxx-09
First of all, I hope you've had an enjoyable valentine's day with your SO, and the family and personal life is perfectly understandable. Life comes first. Also, I'm sorry to hear about your hospital stays and I hope you're feeling better by now.

As for the decision to continue or not, coming from the reader's perspective also, I'd say to continue but only up to a certain point, like before a HEAVILY significant part and important plot info of the story. I mean to stop it in a place where, if anyone is copying, they can go off in a totally different direction of their own ideas because you wouldn't post that part of the story (or any further part?) on here. I am saying this because I'm also reeled into this story thus far already though. Btw, it's great that you found that little piece of information that will hopefully help you in the long run.
2/14/2015 c3 Guest
Very descriptive, almost poetic :D

-Onyxx09 (because they wouldn't let me review this ch)
2/14/2015 c2 Onyxx-09
I apologize for not getting back to this in like, FOREVER. I was trying to stay to my own stories while I had the motivation, and then school and things in life got in the way..
I feel bad for Alex though, I really do. But I'm intrigued to know what she will go through.

I'd think we all have at least one relative like Buretta, one where's it's awkward to be around. I know I do, but they aren't so self-centered (if that's even the right term..). And BOY do I dislike Angelica! I barely got past the the first several paragraphs with her talking and I already dislike her immensely. I really like this :)
2/10/2015 c4 pattacake
I would go for it and try to publish a novel especially if you've already caught people copying you.
2/8/2015 c3 Guest
I hope you update soon
12/3/2014 c3 Feathersky
I'm so glad you are continuing! The preview for chapter two makes me extremely excited for the whole thing! Also, I have a quick question if that's alright. Have you seen the trailer for the new Peter Pan movie? It's called 'Pan' and is coming out 2015. If so, what do you think of it?
12/3/2014 c3 3Lady Jeyne Deadpoole
Your writing really blew me away!
You are extremely talented and I can't wait for the next chapter. :D
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