6/16 c27 sm0key
A phenemonal read, your story is so unique and I can tell so much effort is put into it. I’m excited for new chapters, I hope you are able to update soon and continue the story!
A phenemonal read, your story is so unique and I can tell so much effort is put into it. I’m excited for new chapters, I hope you are able to update soon and continue the story!
1/10 c1 Lunamo
I can relate to her so bad,its understandable when u r the not as bright as the others...I cant wait for it to get interesting..
I can relate to her so bad,its understandable when u r the not as bright as the others...I cant wait for it to get interesting..
1/7 c27 Guest
I'm SO FREAKING READY for Butch to see Buttercup HOLY COW. This club you've created is the perfect setting for the showdown that's about to go down
I'm SO FREAKING READY for Butch to see Buttercup HOLY COW. This club you've created is the perfect setting for the showdown that's about to go down
10/13/2019 c25 The Boar Prince
uuuuuHHHH BRIck is NOT GOIng to like Boomer getting signed onto the construction crew! Please be kind to our blue boi :( Also, the amount of detail you put into the old timey diner is amazing. Thank you for the chapter!
uuuuuHHHH BRIck is NOT GOIng to like Boomer getting signed onto the construction crew! Please be kind to our blue boi :( Also, the amount of detail you put into the old timey diner is amazing. Thank you for the chapter!
8/31/2019 c24 Lighting's Halo
I am loving this story! I'm so ready for the climax! Like Butch beating the shit outta Ace and Brick getting HIM outta Blossom! I'm right, aren't I? Blossom has been possessed, hasn't she?
I am loving this story! I'm so ready for the climax! Like Butch beating the shit outta Ace and Brick getting HIM outta Blossom! I'm right, aren't I? Blossom has been possessed, hasn't she?
8/25/2019 c24 5lumigo akvo9504
I lost touch with the present in this story. It's still spectacularly written. But if you don't read carefully most of the details fall away. This is especially true for the stories concept of time, and it doesn't help that there was such a long break between chapters with no forewarning. Over all, the story is definitely one to recommend to others
I lost touch with the present in this story. It's still spectacularly written. But if you don't read carefully most of the details fall away. This is especially true for the stories concept of time, and it doesn't help that there was such a long break between chapters with no forewarning. Over all, the story is definitely one to recommend to others
2/7/2019 c23 Guest
You write Buttercup and Ace so well- of course it will most likely be dropped in favor of Butch like just about every other story, but let me tell you that this relationship is more interesting and gripping by far. I'm certain I'm not the only one who will relish however much of it remains to relish.
You write Buttercup and Ace so well- of course it will most likely be dropped in favor of Butch like just about every other story, but let me tell you that this relationship is more interesting and gripping by far. I'm certain I'm not the only one who will relish however much of it remains to relish.
2/4/2019 c23 S
Your writing has gotten so clean and creative, but it's actually kind of scary how good you are at describing violence... Giv more monsters in future chapters too plz. Also kill Ace :)
Your writing has gotten so clean and creative, but it's actually kind of scary how good you are at describing violence... Giv more monsters in future chapters too plz. Also kill Ace :)
2/3/2019 c23 5lumigo akvo9504
Of course the rrb would mention the super bowl. What an amazing story though it was a bit of a struggle for me to comprehend with how busy it was still an awesome update though!
Of course the rrb would mention the super bowl. What an amazing story though it was a bit of a struggle for me to comprehend with how busy it was still an awesome update though!