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9/15/2019 c4 Mew
Amazing!
4/12/2018 c4 Guest
This was amazing! Such a cool concept! I loved it from beginning to end
11/23/2017 c1 bananahead1
you need to make sequel
10/29/2017 c1 Reese
Dang this is the LONGEST fanfic for the first chapter I've EVER read
2/21/2017 c4 1ForeverRainingFire
Great story! I really enjoyed it!
1/25/2017 c4 Blind Sky
Amazing story, really awesome!
6/22/2016 c4 2thescribblerdragon
Wow, that makes a lot of since. His reasons for not becoming a guardian. This was all very good.
5/6/2016 c4 keirstinpaige
*Applause* That was... AMAZING! *Standing ovation* LOVE IT! *throws roses*
4/23/2016 c4 gwen
Fuck! This is awesome
1/28/2016 c4 yaoidemon15
This story is simply wonderful. It's amazing how it all comes together. I love the way you portray Jack personality wise. Again this is a great story.
8/18/2015 c4 Guest
I love that you made the staff contain his power like that while most other fanfictions I read have jack get really weak after his staff is broken... I like it better your way where he loses control
5/24/2015 c4 kelsy
That was great! I love your fanfinction!
10/16/2014 c4 5TARDISbluu
Love it! :D
9/2/2014 c4 4FlightFeathers
It was good and well-written. The story was dark, and your way of describing things made it even more darker. I have read many dark-themed stories before, and I have enjoyed them immensely, but this particular story made me feel as if I wasn't in the world of The Guardians: there was a sense of innocence and joy that clung to the movie, and that wasn't here, in my opinion. But that doesn't mean that I didn't enjoy it. (There are some dark RotG fanfics I have read and I loved only a handful due to the same reason I mentioned before.)

But if I put my feelings aside, then I can say that you wrote a story that was more than good. I liked the concept about the staff, and Grandfather Winter. I haven't read the books, so I don't know if the concept about the death of the spirits was yours or canon (though I think it is yours), nevertheless, I liked it. Your creativity and imagination is really good. The thing I didn't like was that you made Jack really miserable. Nuff said.

It was refreshing to read a well thought out story. I am surprised that this fic didn't receive much attention. Anyway, thanks for sharing this. :)
1/30/2014 c4 Guest
Dreamworks shoulda made this the movie. Shame, Dreamworks, for not being as creatibve and smart as MavenAlysse. Shame.
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