4/12/2018 c4 Guest
This was amazing! Such a cool concept! I loved it from beginning to end
This was amazing! Such a cool concept! I loved it from beginning to end
10/29/2017 c1 Reese
Dang this is the LONGEST fanfic for the first chapter I've EVER read
Dang this is the LONGEST fanfic for the first chapter I've EVER read
1/25/2017 c4 Blind Sky
Amazing story, really awesome!
Amazing story, really awesome!
6/22/2016 c4 2thescribblerdragon
Wow, that makes a lot of since. His reasons for not becoming a guardian. This was all very good.
Wow, that makes a lot of since. His reasons for not becoming a guardian. This was all very good.
1/28/2016 c4 yaoidemon15
This story is simply wonderful. It's amazing how it all comes together. I love the way you portray Jack personality wise. Again this is a great story.
This story is simply wonderful. It's amazing how it all comes together. I love the way you portray Jack personality wise. Again this is a great story.
8/18/2015 c4 Guest
I love that you made the staff contain his power like that while most other fanfictions I read have jack get really weak after his staff is broken... I like it better your way where he loses control
I love that you made the staff contain his power like that while most other fanfictions I read have jack get really weak after his staff is broken... I like it better your way where he loses control
5/24/2015 c4 kelsy
That was great! I love your fanfinction!
That was great! I love your fanfinction!
9/2/2014 c4 4FlightFeathers
It was good and well-written. The story was dark, and your way of describing things made it even more darker. I have read many dark-themed stories before, and I have enjoyed them immensely, but this particular story made me feel as if I wasn't in the world of The Guardians: there was a sense of innocence and joy that clung to the movie, and that wasn't here, in my opinion. But that doesn't mean that I didn't enjoy it. (There are some dark RotG fanfics I have read and I loved only a handful due to the same reason I mentioned before.)
But if I put my feelings aside, then I can say that you wrote a story that was more than good. I liked the concept about the staff, and Grandfather Winter. I haven't read the books, so I don't know if the concept about the death of the spirits was yours or canon (though I think it is yours), nevertheless, I liked it. Your creativity and imagination is really good. The thing I didn't like was that you made Jack really miserable. Nuff said.
It was refreshing to read a well thought out story. I am surprised that this fic didn't receive much attention. Anyway, thanks for sharing this. :)
It was good and well-written. The story was dark, and your way of describing things made it even more darker. I have read many dark-themed stories before, and I have enjoyed them immensely, but this particular story made me feel as if I wasn't in the world of The Guardians: there was a sense of innocence and joy that clung to the movie, and that wasn't here, in my opinion. But that doesn't mean that I didn't enjoy it. (There are some dark RotG fanfics I have read and I loved only a handful due to the same reason I mentioned before.)
But if I put my feelings aside, then I can say that you wrote a story that was more than good. I liked the concept about the staff, and Grandfather Winter. I haven't read the books, so I don't know if the concept about the death of the spirits was yours or canon (though I think it is yours), nevertheless, I liked it. Your creativity and imagination is really good. The thing I didn't like was that you made Jack really miserable. Nuff said.
It was refreshing to read a well thought out story. I am surprised that this fic didn't receive much attention. Anyway, thanks for sharing this. :)