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3/1/2014 c1 jayjrat
As a diehard Yankees fan I really enjoyed the way you captured the rivalry! Great job!
9/25/2013 c1 HSophiaM
This is perfection. I love how you write Strauss and Rossi together!
9/24/2013 c1 CJMary69
Wonderful as always. Your stories always leave me wanting more from you!
9/23/2013 c1 JeanneB27
So lovely. And I hate the Yankees too. Although I'm not a Red Sox fan either. Go Minnesota Twins! :)
9/23/2013 c1 33Annber03
Of COURSE they would be on opposing ends of the Red Sox/Yankees rivalry. Of course :D.

I like the way you described how they connected in regards to other sports as well. I'm not a sports fan at all, myself, so I have no stake in that rivalry or in other games at large, but I loved it being used in the context of this story.

I also really like this fun, teasing side that Rossi seems to bring out in Erin (the "Katherine Hepburn in Marilyn Monroe's body" line-I LOVED that). As your story notes, it's such a great balance to how she behaves at work. It's great to see these moments where she gets to (literally sometimes) let her hair down. And the way Rossi plays off it is great, too-the snappy comebacks and everything. The fact that HE'S the one trying to tell her to control herself for a change is nice, too (even though, of course, he eventually gives in :D).

Cute story. And is it weird that I actually want to know whose team won now?

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