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4/6 c13 36A for Antechinus
Hiya,
Sorry I haven't been reviewing, I have been enjoying this fic and it is interesting to see how Mickey reacts in different situations.. this one was really touching.
Thanks for the update. A
4/6 c13 29jjscm01
Good chapter, I can see Mickey reaching out to Kezia and her being irrationally angry in that moment. Well done Mickey for giving her the counsellor details.
2/7 c12 jjscm01
Another very powerful chapter, you’re on a roll! The present action combined with Mickey flashing back works very well.

I wonder what happened with the carjacking which must have been quite traumatic too (but less so)
2/6 c11 jjscm01
First of all, I love how you take throwaway lines from the show that I completely missed the first time and turn them into something so powerful! This is really believable and I like the brief mentions of Mickey’s previous lovers too. I do feel sorry for Mia but poor Mickey :(

“Because if it was feelings then it was fear and it was terror doused in tears and blood.” Chilling line!

One of your best chapters!
2/3 c10 jjscm01
Ahh so exciting to get an update! This is an excellent insight into one of the best Mickey episodes. You explain why he decided to open up to Mia well.
10/18/2020 c9 jjscm01
Really interesting structure again! I like how you are experimenting. I remember this scene well, excellent snippet!
10/4/2020 c8 jjscm01
I love this, so clever and almost like poetry. I don’t remember the episode the quote is from but I’ll have to check it out! Well done.
5/15/2020 c6 jjscm01
Great chapter! It does feel like its own standalone fic. The cutting back and forth between the therapy and Mickey’s day to day life works really well and the little details like what’s on TV make it more real. Also love how you tie it in with canon at the end.
5/6/2020 c5 jjscm01
Another great chapter! Jack and Mickey are both very believable and it’s good to see Mickey taking steps towards recovery. The idea that there were parts of that night that he never told anyone about is haunting.
5/5/2020 c4 jjscm01
Oh this is heartbreaking but so well-written and believable! The last line is a killer. Well done!
10/3/2019 c3 jjscm01
Dark but very good scene. I can definitely see this happening during Mickey’s self-destructive phase.
7/28/2018 c2 Guest
Glad to see this updated, this scene took me right back to 2003. Please continue.
12/2/2013 c1 2ChemicalStar89
Thanks for this story, love your writing.
11/29/2013 c1 36A for Antechinus
Hey, thanks for the chapter, this was quite well written. Thanks A

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