12/15/2013 c5 35MobMotherScitah
It's nice and all. Fairly well written and executed. You stuck pretty true to the movie. It does feel like it should carry on a bit further, though. Could do with less "If a man sees her, they want her." But then again, that is how Kirk is, the dip-stick. Anyways, keep up the good work.
It's nice and all. Fairly well written and executed. You stuck pretty true to the movie. It does feel like it should carry on a bit further, though. Could do with less "If a man sees her, they want her." But then again, that is how Kirk is, the dip-stick. Anyways, keep up the good work.