7/2/2014 c1 XIX
Feels like it's not quite finished.
Feels like it's not quite finished.
12/29/2013 c1 Gregg c
Did you progress this? Gets a bit tricky trying to guide long,tall and ugly eh!
Did you progress this? Gets a bit tricky trying to guide long,tall and ugly eh!
11/17/2013 c1 5mountainman91
Brilliant! You capture the style of King passing well, good Sai or Miss. I envy the way you get inside Roland's head so believably...he's the one sort of character I don't know I can write yet. Yet. The use of sentence fragments and sparse language capture the bleak epicness of Roland's worlds-spanning quest well, and I look forward to a future installment.
Brilliant! You capture the style of King passing well, good Sai or Miss. I envy the way you get inside Roland's head so believably...he's the one sort of character I don't know I can write yet. Yet. The use of sentence fragments and sparse language capture the bleak epicness of Roland's worlds-spanning quest well, and I look forward to a future installment.