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7/7 c1 Guest
Pandemic lockdown over the last year and some change had me playing alot of games I had never really put any thought into before. That gaming tourism led me to the original Breath of Fire. Midway through, I was hooked and sought out the rest of the series. Though I was satisfied after playing through the first 3 games, BoF4 left a bitter taste, as it was bland and kind of boring, plus I didn't like the dragon transformation system. BoF3 stood out as my favorite though. Because of that, I started looking for anything connected to it and wound up finding this story.

While I certainly can't call myself an expert in the game's backstory and lore, the jump off to this story definitely tickled what I remember of it. I absolutely adore the little callbacks and the creative spin this story adds to the end of the game. I look forward to reading through the rest.
6/19 c3 Guest
Aww poor nina :( she's always my ship for BOF but I like how you gave a compelling reason to ship ryu with not momo lol
10/2/2015 c1 33ShanoaWarrior
This chapter was hilarious! I love it! Can't wait to read the rest! :D
10/10/2013 c4 27Nina Windia
Rei anad Momo are so cute together! I'll be looking forward to your next chapter. :)
10/10/2013 c3 Nina Windia
I really like how you're doing the characters on this. And I feel so bad for Nina, not being able to be with Ryu. They totally belong together, especially in BOF 3.

I think it's a good idea to give Ryu some personality. I did the same thing in a bof 3 fic I wrote a few years ago and made him into a goofball and a bit of trickster (I figure living with Rei and Teepo mighta rubbed off on him, least a bit ;) ) Otherwise if you write him as he is in the game, he's just your straight and narrow plain speaking hero guy. Which ain't terribly interesting, is it? ;)
10/10/2013 c2 Nina Windia
Yay Teepo's back! Since Momo and her clone said something had gone wrong before they brought him to life, I wonder if he's going to be a bit different than the Teepo we know though...

Also I like how forward Momo is in this. I've seen too many fanfics with too much blushing and hesitation and preteen behaviour from the female characters. Go get him, gurl! growl!
10/10/2013 c1 Nina Windia
This is great!

Honestly, you leave Momo to tinker for a while on her own and she goes and clones herself...

Also I always thought Rei had a little something for Momo in the game.

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