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7/6/2016 c2 Eric
Hello Bookworm-gurl, I'm going to say that in all honesty, I did greatly liked reading several chapters of your fanfiction story, Calm Before the Storm. The only person I truly felt sorry for in that story was Alice because her whole world was torn apart because of an incredibly stupid mistake she made. If you happen to be friends with the person who wrote the RedHope Fanfiction site or anyone else who needs a new story; I have a Resident Evil Series story in mind that he or she might like. I'd write it myself if I could, since you liked my ideas, along with Allen's and Bobby's for your story; but the only problem is that I can't create my own Fanfiction site. The title of the story is 'Dark Rebirth'; a total rewrite of Calm Before the Storm and the story plot would be the same after 'Secrets and Files', only instead of Alice leaving the ship; she was captured by Umbrella while she and her friends were on rescue/salvage mission and held prisoner for 3 months while being tortured and experimented. You could have the Umbrella scientists create a new generation of cybernetic implants that suppresses human emotions completely. You could have the main villain be the Red Queen and her second in command of her army would be Wesker's rival from the video game franchise; former Russian Vladimir. To make it more dramatic; you could have Umbrella send separate recordings of them beating/torturing Alice while trying to break her and where she actually breaks; to the point that she believes that her friends, especially Claire had abandoned her to die since they never bothered to find and rescue her; because they believed she was dead from watching the recordings. You could have Leon and Ada rescue her on Wesker's orders, having Wesker put more tension between Alice and the others by showing her footage from the Arcadia of Chris stealing command of the ship and turning half of the ship against her; except for Claire, K-Mart, Luther, Jill and Angie as they will never give up on Alice. You could have Wesker provide Alice with a highly advanced exoskeleton tactical combat suit with the a raven like insignia on the front chest and a full face mask that is completely black with only one eye hole. You could have Alice go by the call sign; Night or Death Raven. You could have Alice, when she decides to show her face; that she has a large dry scar going on the left side of her face and a severe burn from a branding iron on her right cheek. You could have the relationship between Chris and Alice the same as Calm Before the Storm. The relationship between Alice and the others;Claire, Jill, Luther, K-Mart and Angie would be as enemies; but slowly changes back into friends after Alice regains her humanity as they try to bring her back to her senses; especially when she sees Angie or K-Mart in pain. I don't mean to offend you; it's just that I enjoyed reading your two stories, it's just a shame that ended Calm Before the Storm the way you did; having Alice kill Claire under the Red Queen's control and that nobody but Alice made it out alive.
3/19/2014 c2 1ChessHatter
rather macabre ending but I liked it :)
9/18/2013 c2 BrandonAlpha20
Uh... o.O
are there any pairings?
*smiling hopefuly*
9/13/2013 c2 Cookie
Omg, it was wonderful and so sad :(. Please, you can't leave it like this! A happy end would be nice :(
8/30/2013 c1 Cathy77
I like how u started this story hope to read more soon :)
8/29/2013 c1 big fan
Nice recap of previous events, please let the returning face be Matt. I miss him :(

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