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12/13/2016 c10 og
Top 10 most improved fanfictions. It was terrible but then it actually got good around chapter 9 or 10. Nice job, you still gotta work on dialogue but you're doing great.
9/18/2016 c9 Mira Lee
Omg thank u soo much for updating!
9/13/2016 c9 Kanata
Great storytelling! Details and description of the scenery are clearly done. Keep the good job!
11/25/2015 c8 10Samjok-o
YAY! I really enjoy this story, and so please continue! I'm ok even with short chapters
10/18/2015 c7 1TheColourOfMonochrome
Even though the chaper is quite short i enjoyed it. I've actually being waiting for a long time for this. I hope that you can add more imagination in your stories. Anyway, hope your story comes along great!
Gr8 M8 8/8 no h8.
11/24/2013 c5 2quuruli
hello guys, it's already been 3 months since i have updated this story. unfortunately i lost my 'luminous story' folder but i will try my best to continue this. i appreciate your reviews! it gives me motivation :)
11/2/2013 c5 Guest
Can't wait for more!
11/2/2013 c5 Lady Syndra
Looking forward to the next chapter!
4/26/2013 c3 Anonymous936
I like it. I can't wait for the next chapter.
If it is possible, I would prefer that he does not take the dark path, but the global version only allows the dark side, so try your best if you pick light.
Good luck on writing.
4/14/2013 c2 FlipHazards
I like the story alot. I think developing Lumi and Lania's relationship is a must and I like the idea of quests, but you gotta put some sort of "big" conflict in it (ie Lumi tries to find ways to control his darker half so he won't hurt anyone important).
4/9/2013 c1 35ZoologyKaM
I would love to have someone continue the story but my first honest reaction was,
'all you did was copy exactly what happened...'

I love the Luminous storyline, and really want to see more but it will be a disappointment if you only say what was exactly in the storyline without adding any extra thoughts or actions. I'm not against following the storyline but I've already read it and don't feel like reading it word for word again.

Let loose with this, add more to it and I'm sure you'll do great.

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