2/17 c3 1Pinkypi
This is pretty good, Tsumeki's parent must really be elitist though if they were willing to overlook how hard it is to have children to abandon her when they could've easily helped her set something up to trick someone for her first tail though.
This is pretty good, Tsumeki's parent must really be elitist though if they were willing to overlook how hard it is to have children to abandon her when they could've easily helped her set something up to trick someone for her first tail though.
4/15/2018 c10 1insanemaelstorm
Nice story. Tsumeki is amazing oc-wise. Like the realistic approach to the ninja world. Can't wait to read more
Nice story. Tsumeki is amazing oc-wise. Like the realistic approach to the ninja world. Can't wait to read more
11/13/2016 c10 twista1
It's a shame you aren't writing this anymore. It is and was an awesome story. Here's to hoping you come back to it someday.
Farewell Glory of Dawn!
It's a shame you aren't writing this anymore. It is and was an awesome story. Here's to hoping you come back to it someday.
Farewell Glory of Dawn!
7/22/2016 c10 7Seth.Smelser
It so beautiful in the end I want cry I enjoyed reading this looking forward to a possible sequel.
It so beautiful in the end I want cry I enjoyed reading this looking forward to a possible sequel.
8/15/2015 c10 INO
Good job with putting out an update, I'm sure it's not easy.
Good job with putting out an update, I'm sure it's not easy.
5/2/2015 c1 1PhoenixFire264
it doesn't matter if I like it or well I firmly believe that you can do whatever you want with this story because it is yours and 't matter if I like it or not
it doesn't matter if I like it or well I firmly believe that you can do whatever you want with this story because it is yours and 't matter if I like it or not
4/25/2015 c10 1BamBam1776
Please update this story. I fell in love with it a couple years back and I was crushed when you didn't update it! I fucking love this story! Please update faster 3
Please update this story. I fell in love with it a couple years back and I was crushed when you didn't update it! I fucking love this story! Please update faster 3
2/17/2015 c10 Shane
I admit, i was a little scared to read this. I love NarutoxFemKyuubi stories(the non-harem ones are so rare), but 10 chapters in 2 years? I dislike the disappointment that comes with waiting and wondering if it's been abandoned. "I WILL finish this story" means very little if it gets updated once a year.
I love this story, and look forward to more, but please update.
I admit, i was a little scared to read this. I love NarutoxFemKyuubi stories(the non-harem ones are so rare), but 10 chapters in 2 years? I dislike the disappointment that comes with waiting and wondering if it's been abandoned. "I WILL finish this story" means very little if it gets updated once a year.
I love this story, and look forward to more, but please update.
2/17/2015 c10 Guest
Eh. I was with you up until this chapter, but I've lost the will to continue. Naruto is weak, despite how differently you've portrayed him. He, someone whose been training with a sword far longer than Sasuke, just gets disarmed like that? I just don't see it happening. Sasuke has been OP as fuck since that chapter when you were like "Oh sorry didn't mean to make him look weak" you've gone to the other end of the spectrum -_-
Eh. I was with you up until this chapter, but I've lost the will to continue. Naruto is weak, despite how differently you've portrayed him. He, someone whose been training with a sword far longer than Sasuke, just gets disarmed like that? I just don't see it happening. Sasuke has been OP as fuck since that chapter when you were like "Oh sorry didn't mean to make him look weak" you've gone to the other end of the spectrum -_-