6/29/2019 c1 Surviwar
Hi, will you continue this story? I know it is several years but it is really interesting :)
Hi, will you continue this story? I know it is several years but it is really interesting :)
6/13/2019 c3 Eva Torres
Hello, I love the story and I am a writer, editor, ect... among other things and I am wanting to know what comes next. If I like what is next I may have something to offer you. When you get a chance email me at: or text me at: (352) 440-6822
Hello, I love the story and I am a writer, editor, ect... among other things and I am wanting to know what comes next. If I like what is next I may have something to offer you. When you get a chance email me at: or text me at: (352) 440-6822
2/14/2018 c3 eva
please continue great story when you do txt me at 3523251772
please continue great story when you do txt me at 3523251772
10/4/2017 c3 Jallielover0202
This has the potential to be an amazing story really wish u would finish it
This has the potential to be an amazing story really wish u would finish it
8/19/2017 c3 3RyanMK666
honestly hope you continue this story, very well written and a pretty good story line
honestly hope you continue this story, very well written and a pretty good story line
3/21/2017 c3 GPL
Please continue
Please continue
6/18/2016 c3 Kittykatkins
Fuck, what a place to leave it!
But you have me utterly gripped in this; poor Brian never stood a chance really, did he? I hope Dom gets him back to being Bri not Soldier O'Conner.
Please (a genuine beg here), please update this as soon as you can. My mind is on fire with what's going to happen next - both on the battlefield and back in LA with Tanner and Dom's plan.
You write incredibly well (bar a few words mixed up, but we all do that!) and your story is so alive to me, plus your characterisations are en pointe - Dom in particular is brilliant and this new OOC Brian is so intriguing and well drawn that you can't help but be pulled into him and his story. Keep writing lots please!
Hoping for another chapter very soon, Kitty.
Fuck, what a place to leave it!
But you have me utterly gripped in this; poor Brian never stood a chance really, did he? I hope Dom gets him back to being Bri not Soldier O'Conner.
Please (a genuine beg here), please update this as soon as you can. My mind is on fire with what's going to happen next - both on the battlefield and back in LA with Tanner and Dom's plan.
You write incredibly well (bar a few words mixed up, but we all do that!) and your story is so alive to me, plus your characterisations are en pointe - Dom in particular is brilliant and this new OOC Brian is so intriguing and well drawn that you can't help but be pulled into him and his story. Keep writing lots please!
Hoping for another chapter very soon, Kitty.
6/10/2016 c3 ima
please complete the story dont leave it halve way
please complete the story dont leave it halve way
4/5/2016 c3 7Bluepaw265
This is an awesome book. I love it. Though, will you be continuing this or have you left it unfinished?
Even so, I'll be waiting for another chapter if it does come out.
This is an awesome book. I love it. Though, will you be continuing this or have you left it unfinished?
Even so, I'll be waiting for another chapter if it does come out.