4/22/2013 c4 4FluentFletcher2
I confess to wondering the same exact thing. Uggh. 12:00PM? I'm going to rest.
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I confess to wondering the same exact thing. Uggh. 12:00PM? I'm going to rest.
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4/22/2013 c2 FluentFletcher2
I do enjoy the description you have put of the mer creatures, however I might add that you should focus a bit more on the time. Everything just seems a tad bit rushed. Please do not take it personally, but this IS criticism.
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I do enjoy the description you have put of the mer creatures, however I might add that you should focus a bit more on the time. Everything just seems a tad bit rushed. Please do not take it personally, but this IS criticism.
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4/22/2013 c1 FluentFletcher2
I'm a tad bit embarrassed to say this, but i think my most enjoyable character is Blair...
Well, that was... not worth confessing...
I'm a tad bit embarrassed to say this, but i think my most enjoyable character is Blair...
Well, that was... not worth confessing...
3/8/2013 c1 A Person Who Likes Comedy
Okay, so I'm a little confused on the part about Edward. Does he actually powers?
Okay, so I'm a little confused on the part about Edward. Does he actually powers?