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11/5/2015 c1 5Teraunce
I'm really really surprised this has FanFiction.
10/3/2015 c3 Tech Warrior Ender
Why. Why is she already spilling out her life story for him?
8/27/2013 c23 1barber477
I hope you don't abandon this story, I like it, it's really good.
7/23/2013 c22 barber477
Nice, I can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
7/15/2013 c21 barber477
Aw, how nice he gets an egg (maybe a demon egg?). I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
7/9/2013 c20 barber477
Awesome chapter with awesome weapons. I wonder where all the other bandits are? I can't wait to read the next chapter and hopefully find out! :) ( Maybe they're all at dinner? :) )
6/29/2013 c19 barber477
Nice chapter. Ha, it's going to take him a while to cut thru that. :) Can't wait for the next chapter.
6/17/2013 c18 barber477
Nice chapter. Can't wait for the next one. :)
6/11/2013 c17 barber477
Awesome story so far, can't wait for the next chapter! :)
3/25/2013 c1 2Timeless Dreamer Neo
Out of curiosity, are you planning to bridge into canon? What I mean by this, is that is your OC going to also end up in Medius along with Kieri and Kazai?
3/4/2013 c3 Guest
Yet another great chapter. Thank you.
3/6/2013 c3 33Wolfsalvo
Good job on these last 2 chapters, they were interesting, not to mention it is good to see you actively writing in this archive. Not many stories for this comic... But for this story, it gives a sense of 'awe' that at least someone is writing this. I know I was glad t see another active story in the sdamned archive...

Keep up the good work, I didn't see any errors while I was reading.
3/6/2013 c2 Wolfsalvo
i will leave review later, just need to put this in alert!
2/21/2013 c1 Guest
This is very good I wish to see more please.
2/21/2013 c1 Wolfsalvo
Nice chapter, shorter than most things i read, but i guess that didnt dampen how this story was. I look forward to the next update when you do post it. I didnt notice any errors other than a few odd wording in a few places, but still, this story has potentail. keep up the good work on this story and any others you may have in the future.
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