7/15/2013 c21 barber477
Aw, how nice he gets an egg (maybe a demon egg?). I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Aw, how nice he gets an egg (maybe a demon egg?). I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
7/9/2013 c20 barber477
Awesome chapter with awesome weapons. I wonder where all the other bandits are? I can't wait to read the next chapter and hopefully find out! :) ( Maybe they're all at dinner? :) )
Awesome chapter with awesome weapons. I wonder where all the other bandits are? I can't wait to read the next chapter and hopefully find out! :) ( Maybe they're all at dinner? :) )
6/29/2013 c19 barber477
Nice chapter. Ha, it's going to take him a while to cut thru that. :) Can't wait for the next chapter.
Nice chapter. Ha, it's going to take him a while to cut thru that. :) Can't wait for the next chapter.
3/25/2013 c1 2Timeless Dreamer Neo
Out of curiosity, are you planning to bridge into canon? What I mean by this, is that is your OC going to also end up in Medius along with Kieri and Kazai?
Out of curiosity, are you planning to bridge into canon? What I mean by this, is that is your OC going to also end up in Medius along with Kieri and Kazai?
3/6/2013 c3 33Wolfsalvo
Good job on these last 2 chapters, they were interesting, not to mention it is good to see you actively writing in this archive. Not many stories for this comic... But for this story, it gives a sense of 'awe' that at least someone is writing this. I know I was glad t see another active story in the sdamned archive...
Keep up the good work, I didn't see any errors while I was reading.
Good job on these last 2 chapters, they were interesting, not to mention it is good to see you actively writing in this archive. Not many stories for this comic... But for this story, it gives a sense of 'awe' that at least someone is writing this. I know I was glad t see another active story in the sdamned archive...
Keep up the good work, I didn't see any errors while I was reading.
2/21/2013 c1 Guest
This is very good I wish to see more please.
This is very good I wish to see more please.
2/21/2013 c1 Wolfsalvo
Nice chapter, shorter than most things i read, but i guess that didnt dampen how this story was. I look forward to the next update when you do post it. I didnt notice any errors other than a few odd wording in a few places, but still, this story has potentail. keep up the good work on this story and any others you may have in the future.
Nice chapter, shorter than most things i read, but i guess that didnt dampen how this story was. I look forward to the next update when you do post it. I didnt notice any errors other than a few odd wording in a few places, but still, this story has potentail. keep up the good work on this story and any others you may have in the future.