12/10/2018 c10 110Right What Is Wrong
Hooray, it's still going!
Don't worry about minor divergences. They spice up the story. :)
Hooray, it's still going!
Don't worry about minor divergences. They spice up the story. :)
9/25/2018 c9 Foxypaws3
Gwaaah, I'll say this much, it's about this point that I start to wane interest in the game as well, after defeating the Divine Dragon is where my latest save file is at. I know it's been three years since you've updated this, but I've literally binge-read your entire works on the novelization so far. It's really the most amazing LoD piece on here aside from 'Once More With Changes', though that piece has also been abandoned in a sense. Really I am curious to see how you'd have developed Miranda further and expanded on Meru since she's not able to be until this point in the game. Your fight scenes have been amazingly well-paced, the single sentences giving a higher-paced velocity to the story where the action is, and I loved every single instance of relationship development that you've crafted so far. The only qualm I have is that I wish you would have given the characters an excuse to return to Lohan to grab Kongol's spirit, or perhaps maybe write in the merchant somehow just to give it to him a little earlier than the ending. It's a small personal nitpick though, and I understand how difficult that is to write in narratively without breaking character. I hope this review will inspire you to continue this story though, as one LoD fan to another, and I hope to see it completed someday as well~!
Gwaaah, I'll say this much, it's about this point that I start to wane interest in the game as well, after defeating the Divine Dragon is where my latest save file is at. I know it's been three years since you've updated this, but I've literally binge-read your entire works on the novelization so far. It's really the most amazing LoD piece on here aside from 'Once More With Changes', though that piece has also been abandoned in a sense. Really I am curious to see how you'd have developed Miranda further and expanded on Meru since she's not able to be until this point in the game. Your fight scenes have been amazingly well-paced, the single sentences giving a higher-paced velocity to the story where the action is, and I loved every single instance of relationship development that you've crafted so far. The only qualm I have is that I wish you would have given the characters an excuse to return to Lohan to grab Kongol's spirit, or perhaps maybe write in the merchant somehow just to give it to him a little earlier than the ending. It's a small personal nitpick though, and I understand how difficult that is to write in narratively without breaking character. I hope this review will inspire you to continue this story though, as one LoD fan to another, and I hope to see it completed someday as well~!
7/31/2017 c1 ZNDelta4
I haven't checked up here for almost 3 years and loved reading this fic. Shame it has not been updated since 2014. Last time I read this was the summer of that year... :-(
I haven't checked up here for almost 3 years and loved reading this fic. Shame it has not been updated since 2014. Last time I read this was the summer of that year... :-(
12/19/2015 c9 5Stars-under-the-Sky
Please continue this. I know it's been a year since the last update but man I miss this story. I love your novalization and seeing how the story is in your mind. So please please please continue it
Please continue this. I know it's been a year since the last update but man I miss this story. I love your novalization and seeing how the story is in your mind. So please please please continue it
8/24/2014 c9 4Matthias Stormcrow
Finally caught up I love the story so far. Please update soon. Dying to know what you do next.
Finally caught up I love the story so far. Please update soon. Dying to know what you do next.
8/12/2014 c9 Beast of the Sea
You're still going?
Keep it up. You do have readers, and this is a heroic effort.
You're still going?
Keep it up. You do have readers, and this is a heroic effort.